FP Riffs 14: Momma Fluttershy
Okay. Time for a history lesson.
My first exposure to this story was when my pal NaturalGlitch, who you may remember from my collab with him on “Punishment” and his contribution to the MONSTROUS riff of “My Second Life,” directed me to it on FIMFiction. He did so because another user was fighting him on the comments over an entirely unrelated foalcon story. That fight sat unchecked for a while before I just said “fuck it” and told both participating parties to shut their traps and stop clogging the comments with their tryst. No, I wasn’t much nicer in my actual comment.
That was the end of it until I made a challenge to my colleague tonight, twow443. My challenge was this: he had to dictate the entirety of Dakari-King Mykan’s “Star Fleet Magic” saga, at minimum completing the first story before he moved to another state. If he failed, he would need to read aloud to the Skype group the story we’re riffing now, as well as “Rarity’s Generous Plan.” If he succeeded, I would have to do the same for the entirety - the ENTIRETY - of “Living the Dream.” Hell, he already made me get a head start.
Well... he failed. For a variety of reasons, one being “My Second Life” and another being his sheer unwillingness to suffer through the horrors of Mykan, he got to a point where reading the rest before he lost his ability to Internet would be impossible. Thus, he read the conditioned story. He loathed every disgusting, despicable moment of it. He squirmed, and I laughed heartily at his misery behind a tub of popcorn. And now, in fulfilling his wish to collaborate with me on an FP Riff, I twisted his arm to make it this story.
I present to you the worst story twow has ever seen, the only one he legitimately DESPISES, and therefore the one he’s more qualified to tear down than any other. People, I present to you now... SoulHook’s "Momma Fluttershy."
I promise you, you’re not ready for this.
My first exposure to this story was when my pal NaturalGlitch, who you may remember from my collab with him on “Punishment” and his contribution to the MONSTROUS riff of “My Second Life,” directed me to it on FIMFiction. He did so because another user was fighting him on the comments over an entirely unrelated foalcon story. That fight sat unchecked for a while before I just said “fuck it” and told both participating parties to shut their traps and stop clogging the comments with their tryst. No, I wasn’t much nicer in my actual comment.
That was the end of it until I made a challenge to my colleague tonight, twow443. My challenge was this: he had to dictate the entirety of Dakari-King Mykan’s “Star Fleet Magic” saga, at minimum completing the first story before he moved to another state. If he failed, he would need to read aloud to the Skype group the story we’re riffing now, as well as “Rarity’s Generous Plan.” If he succeeded, I would have to do the same for the entirety - the ENTIRETY - of “Living the Dream.” Hell, he already made me get a head start.
Well... he failed. For a variety of reasons, one being “My Second Life” and another being his sheer unwillingness to suffer through the horrors of Mykan, he got to a point where reading the rest before he lost his ability to Internet would be impossible. Thus, he read the conditioned story. He loathed every disgusting, despicable moment of it. He squirmed, and I laughed heartily at his misery behind a tub of popcorn. And now, in fulfilling his wish to collaborate with me on an FP Riff, I twisted his arm to make it this story.
I present to you the worst story twow has ever seen, the only one he legitimately DESPISES, and therefore the one he’s more qualified to tear down than any other. People, I present to you now... SoulHook’s "Momma Fluttershy."
I promise you, you’re not ready for this.
Fallen Prime: Mother of god. You ponies actually did invent laptops. I was being sarcastic!
Fluttershy: I’m sorry, but I don’t know what you’re talking about. You never said anything to me about-
(The TV blips on, revealing Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash.)
Pinkie Pie: (from TV) He was talking to ME about it! Ooh, Fluttershy, you got a laptop?
Fluttershy: Just yesterday. It has a built-in webcam and everything! It didn’t cost me nearly as much as it would have to set that giant console up in my house.
Fallen: Let me guess. We’re doing another riff?
Rainbow Dash: (from TV) Was it that obvious?
Fallen: Yes. It was. You’re jumping the gun a bit, though, aren’t you? There are normally at least three of us in here for it.
Dash: Yeah, but we made exceptions for Anon and Ring, remember?
Pinkie: Besides, you’ve got company coming as we speak!
Fluttershy: Well... the story’s not going to be that bad, is it? I don’t think I could take something else like “Rarity’s Generous Plan.”
Fallen: Easy for you to say. You only had to read YOUR chapter. But still, you’re easing up on Fluttershy, right?
(An awkward silence occurs as Dash and Pinkie glance nervously between Fallen, Fluttershy and each other.)
Fallen: Oh, you’ve gotta be fucking kidding me.
(Suddenly, the doors open, allowing in twow443 and Derpy Hooves.)
twow443: Hey there Fallen.
Fallen: twow? Huh. All this time, and you two are still full of surpri-is that Derpy!?
Derpy: Yup! Can I actually stay in here for longer this time?
(The armory doors slam shut and lock.)
Fallen: That’s as good an answer as any. What are YOU doing here, though? Not gonna make another mess, are you?
(Derpy shakes her head.)
twow: Pinkie said that you wanted us to come over.
Fallen: She says a lot of things.
twow: She didn’t say why though... Oh dear Luna.
Fallen: Yep.
twow: Damn. I knew this time would come eventually. What are we riffing? Oh, and hello Fluttershy.
(Fluttershy gives a meek little wave while hiding behind Fallen.)
Fallen: She’ll warm up to you.
twow: Hopefully. Never really had the chance to see other ponies. You know, being a human and all.
Fallen: Really? Because they all seem to be flocking to me. I have no damn clue why. And for the record, Pinkie didn’t tell me a damn thing about any of this.
twow: Welp, we’re fucked.
Dash: You have NO idea.
Pinkie: I hope you four are ready, because you’re gonna be riffing “Momma Fluttershy!”
Fluttershy: Oh. Actually, that doesn’t sound so bad!
Fallen: Pinkie, you psychotic bitch.
twow: NO.
Derpy: twow, what’s wrong?
twow: THIS STORY IS HELL IN WRITTEN FORM.
Fallen: He’s not exaggerating that much. This is fucking madness. The absolute worst kind of story.
Fluttershy: How can something with a title like that be so awful, though?
Fallen: I’ll never get why no one can learn to stop asking questions like that. There’s gonna be hell to pay for Rainbow and Pinkie when we’re done, I promise you that.
twow: Pinkie, open this damn door! At least let Fluttershy out!
Pinkie: Sorry, but we’re already starting!
(Buzzer sounds.)
All: We’ve got story sign!
Fluttershy: I’m sorry, but I don’t know what you’re talking about. You never said anything to me about-
(The TV blips on, revealing Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash.)
Pinkie Pie: (from TV) He was talking to ME about it! Ooh, Fluttershy, you got a laptop?
Fluttershy: Just yesterday. It has a built-in webcam and everything! It didn’t cost me nearly as much as it would have to set that giant console up in my house.
Fallen: Let me guess. We’re doing another riff?
Rainbow Dash: (from TV) Was it that obvious?
Fallen: Yes. It was. You’re jumping the gun a bit, though, aren’t you? There are normally at least three of us in here for it.
Dash: Yeah, but we made exceptions for Anon and Ring, remember?
Pinkie: Besides, you’ve got company coming as we speak!
Fluttershy: Well... the story’s not going to be that bad, is it? I don’t think I could take something else like “Rarity’s Generous Plan.”
Fallen: Easy for you to say. You only had to read YOUR chapter. But still, you’re easing up on Fluttershy, right?
(An awkward silence occurs as Dash and Pinkie glance nervously between Fallen, Fluttershy and each other.)
Fallen: Oh, you’ve gotta be fucking kidding me.
(Suddenly, the doors open, allowing in twow443 and Derpy Hooves.)
twow443: Hey there Fallen.
Fallen: twow? Huh. All this time, and you two are still full of surpri-is that Derpy!?
Derpy: Yup! Can I actually stay in here for longer this time?
(The armory doors slam shut and lock.)
Fallen: That’s as good an answer as any. What are YOU doing here, though? Not gonna make another mess, are you?
(Derpy shakes her head.)
twow: Pinkie said that you wanted us to come over.
Fallen: She says a lot of things.
twow: She didn’t say why though... Oh dear Luna.
Fallen: Yep.
twow: Damn. I knew this time would come eventually. What are we riffing? Oh, and hello Fluttershy.
(Fluttershy gives a meek little wave while hiding behind Fallen.)
Fallen: She’ll warm up to you.
twow: Hopefully. Never really had the chance to see other ponies. You know, being a human and all.
Fallen: Really? Because they all seem to be flocking to me. I have no damn clue why. And for the record, Pinkie didn’t tell me a damn thing about any of this.
twow: Welp, we’re fucked.
Dash: You have NO idea.
Pinkie: I hope you four are ready, because you’re gonna be riffing “Momma Fluttershy!”
Fluttershy: Oh. Actually, that doesn’t sound so bad!
Fallen: Pinkie, you psychotic bitch.
twow: NO.
Derpy: twow, what’s wrong?
twow: THIS STORY IS HELL IN WRITTEN FORM.
Fallen: He’s not exaggerating that much. This is fucking madness. The absolute worst kind of story.
Fluttershy: How can something with a title like that be so awful, though?
Fallen: I’ll never get why no one can learn to stop asking questions like that. There’s gonna be hell to pay for Rainbow and Pinkie when we’re done, I promise you that.
twow: Pinkie, open this damn door! At least let Fluttershy out!
Pinkie: Sorry, but we’re already starting!
(Buzzer sounds.)
All: We’ve got story sign!
WARNING:
EXTREME EXPLICITY.
Fluttershy: Is that even a word?
Fallen: Nope.
Some of you might find this arousing.
twow: Sure, if you’re a sick FUCK.
Some of you might find this disturbing.
Fallen: Yeah, that sounds more right.
Derpy: This isn’t gonna be good, is it?
twow: You’re a mother, correct? You’re REALLY gonna hate this.
No-one forced you to read this.
Fallen: Yeah... about that...
twow: Well, that’s bullshit!
Not for the faint of heart nor audience below 18.
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
twow: Not enough of a warning.
Momma Fluttershy
Fluttershy: I still say this title’s too innocent to be anything as bad as you’re saying it is.
twow: Fluttershy, you’re my favorite. This title is not even close to what happens in this.
Fluttershy: It looks like it’s just about me becoming a mother, though!
Fallen: Well... all I’ll say is that you’re not wrong.
twow: (shudders)
As the butterfly flew past a window in the late afternoon evening, it could for a moment enjoy the warm and soothing sunset in its wonderful orange and yellow. From the window of an isolated cottage at the borders of the Everfree forest, a very fine and modest pony known for her wonderful personality and adorable attitude to her surroundings beheld the beautiful horizon.
Fallen: Nice, humble beginnings. I have to be impressed with the descriptive language, if nothing else.
twow: This is gonna be one of those very few times that I wish a story didn’t have so many descriptions.
Fallen: Yeah, I long for Martin Willis now.
Fluttershy: (shudders)
Derpy: We should riff that twow!
twow: Sure. Just allow me to repair my shattered soul after we’re done with this.
Sure, she was among other things a renowned doormat, but aside from that also the kindest pegasus alive in the land of Equestria. Her smiling face could enjoy the last warm rays of today's sun, something she more than happily experienced from her comfortable sofa.
Fluttershy: Oh, you’re too kind...
Derpy: You’re not a doormat Fluttershy! Ponies don’t walk on you!
twow: Wrong type of doormat Derpy.
Fallen: At least, I HOPE it is...
"Fluttershy?" a voice asked from nowhere, disturbing the mentioned pony's perfect balance of harmony and peace.
twow: Guess she was meditating.
Fallen: And this is easily the least severe breach of peace in the story.
"Uh...? W-what was that, Twilight?" the yellow mare answered, concerned about her friend's presence and what she just said. "Oh, I'm so sorry! I... I dozed off..." she then apologized
Fallen: You don’t say.
with a slight blush over her pretty cheeks.
Derpy: You do have nice cheeks, Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: Th... thank you... I think...
twow: Derpy, what?
Derpy: What? I was just being nice!
The purple unicorn giggled and waved a fore hoof from her wooden chair which she had taken from the kitchen.
Fallen: Oh shit, she’s robbing you!
twow: It’s a chair.
Fallen: It’s not HER chair.
It was alright according to her, especially since she knew all about her friend's current condition. After all, it was she who incredibly had introduced this shy little thing to the mighty stallion among stallions, Big Macintosh.
Fluttershy: But I already know Big Macintosh.
twow: If I know basic shipping rules, you’re dating or married to him in this.
Fluttershy: Really? Well, at least it’s better than... well... (gulp)
He had done his part of the nature's cycle, contributing to what every mare and stallion before or later goes through...
Derpy: The first date?
Fallen: Puberty?
twow: Learning how to read?
"I wondered if the foal is doing well?" the lavender pony repeated in a calm tone, not minding at all that her friend missed that question.
Fluttershy looked deep into Twilight's eyes for a split second before glancing down at her swollen belly.
Fluttershy: Aww... I am going to be a mother!
Fallen: Yeah... about that...
twow: No! I can’t! I don’t wanna watch her read this!
Derpy: (pats twow on the back) It’s okay. We’ll get through this.
She was in the family way and had walked that path the past months. It all began with a magical night, when the hunk of a stallion and the beauty of a mare agreed in a warm embrace to finally unite their legacies into a new pony,
Fallen: Interesting way to put it.
twow: Ya mean sex?!
Fluttershy: Well, how else would I have gotten impregnated?
twow: You don’t want me to answer that.
Derpy: A bank?
twow: I might have told you a bit too much of our world, Derpy.
an offspring for them to call their own and love to the end of their days. Since then she had begged for the miracle of life to smite her, nurture the egg in her body during the lustful period of estrous so she now could sit her today
Fluttershy: What about my today?
Derpy: I think that was replaced with tomorrow.
with that round tummy.
Fluttershy gently caressed her precious belly with both fore hooves, reminded of what she soon would become as soon as the little life inside her was ready to wake up in the land of Equestria as another beloved subject to Celestia.
Fallen: Keep telling yourself that.
Derpy: I remember when I was pregnant with Dinky. That was a beautiful time.
A very happy smile struck her lips as she giggled back.
"It's... doing just fine. Won't be long until he or she is ready to come out"
Fluttershy: I would have liked to know the sex of the child beforehand.
twow: Out of curiosity, would you have rather had a boy or a girl?
Fluttershy: Oh, I’d hate to have to choose! It wouldn’t matter to me either way, since it would still be my child.
she said with a tone resembling excitement and joy, a tone Twilight couldn't resist cock her eyebrow at.
Fallen: Should be “cocking.” But it’s those little mistakes that’ll keep you sane throughout this.
twow: And makes it awkward.
"Aren't you... you know... scared that it will hurt when it's time? We all know how delicate you are..."
Derpy: Oh, it’s not all that bad. You know, once you get past the agonizing pain of pushing a full-sized foal out through your-
Fluttershy: I think you can stop now...
twow: Well, I could have died happy not knowing that.
the lavender mare did her best to not sound rude, smiling sheepishly to hide it further. But Fluttershy wasn't the pony made for such interpretations. She KNEW she was weak and defenseless when it came to such things.
Fallen: How, though, if she’s never given birth before?
twow: Ponies could tell her? Like Derpy was about to?
Derpy: Sorry.
Fallen: How bad is it to give birth to a unicorn, anyway? That horn must hurt like a bitch coming out.
Derpy: Well, if they succeed in positioning the head so it comes out first, it’s not as painful. If the horn scratches against the side like Dinky did...
twow: Ouch.
Fluttershy: Why are we still having this discussion!?
twow: It’s better than reading this.
However, the smile remained as she kept her eyes on her large stomach.
"No. I would be afraid in any other cases... but... when it comes to the idea of... having m-my own foal... I'll do anything for it"
Fallen: Would you fight off a tentacle demon from hell?
Fluttershy: WHAT!?
Fallen: Sorry. Jumping the gun a little bit.
she reassured before adjusting her sitting position; it wasn't so comfortable anymore. Meanwhile, Twilight smiled again and looked out through the window. She noticed right quick how long it had been since she came here. Just a few minutes ago.
Fallen: If it was a few minutes ago, how can you say you’ve been there a long time?
twow: Because of the reason. (slapped by Fallen)
"So... when is Big Macintosh coming back?" she suddenly asked, getting down from her chair in order to prepare for her leave without Fluttershy's knowledge.
Fallen: “I must go. My planet needs me.”
twow: “Let my ponies go!”
Fluttershy: ...I’m kind of lost.
Derpy: twow didn’t let me see that movie yet. I’m lost with you Fluttershy.
The pregnant pegasus sighed and looked out at the sunset too, not even doubting her beloved stallion would be late. "He said today's chores could take some time, and I thought it was okay since there's still a little less than a month left".
Fallen: See that? For a pregnant woman, that’s the equivalent of “two days until retirement.”
Derpy: Oh! I get that one!
Fallen: Great job, Derpy! Now think of the implications.
Derpy: ...Oh.
As she finished that sentence, her eyes glanced away at something her friend had brought with her, resting on the small table between them both.
Fluttershy: They left quietly so they wouldn’t disturb its sleep.
Derpy: Such a cute little thing.
A little blue box
Fallen: Sure, it LOOKS little, but wait ‘til you see the inside.
twow: FALLEN. STOP.
Fallen: It was a TARDIS joke, twow.
twow: Wonderful. Excuse me while I slam my head into a wall.
Derpy: Uhhhh...
Fallen: Just let him.
Derpy: No offense, but humans can’t deal with injuries like I can.
with a red band wrapping it from all sides and meeting in the middle by a little rosette.
Fluttershy spent a good five seconds beholding the ideal-looking present,
Fallen: Worshipping it as her new god.
Fluttershy: Wait, what?
twow: It’s okay Fluttershy. I should tell you about the time that I convinced Dinky that there was a muffin god. (slapped by Derpy)
Derpy: She came home holding a plastic muffin and telling me that we needed to bow before it!
Fallen: ...did you?
Derpy: Possibly...
twow: Oh Fallen, do I have a story to tell you... (slapped again by Derpy)
knowing she had forgotten to bring up the subject about it.
"Um, by the way, Twilight..." she asked gently so the lavender equine would look over her shoulder. "I just wanted to thank you for the present. W-what is it?".
Fluttershy: It’s a wrapped present. It’s supposed to be a surprise. If I wanted to know, I would open it.
twow: Yeah, about that...
Twilight looked at the little quadratic box. It was not wider than her own pad, yet so thin you'd wonder if it was just a card or something. Soon a smile revealed itself on her lips.
twow: “Don’t worry. I made it just for you.”
Fallen: Just... don’t do that.
twow: “Why don’t you... have a peek inside?”
Fallen: No, really, don’t.
Derpy: Is something wrong, Fallen?
Fallen: Extremely.
"Just a little thing for you and the foal... nothing special at all, but I thought you should have it"
Fluttershy: Oh! How thoughtful of Twilight!
twow: (sobs)
Derpy: Why are you so upset? It’s just a present.
twow: Fluttershy’s innocence. It’s about to get ripped to shreds.
Fluttershy: No offense, but... that’s not new for me...
twow: This is a whole new level of pain.
her response became before she turned back to the door she tried to exit. Fluttershy shifted her eyes between the little box and Twilight, unsure if to express her gratitude once again just to make sure her friend understood what this meant to her.
Fluttershy: Well... how do I know when I say “thank you” too many times and it just gets annoying? I don’t want to be annoying to somepony who just gave me an incredibly thoughtful gift...
twow: I severely doubt that anyone can find you annoying.
The other ponies inside her circle of friendship had already visited her several times to either congratulate or simply show their support to her. None of them doubted Fluttershy would be a wonderful mother.
Derpy: That is true, Fluttershy. You’re going to be a great mother!
Fluttershy: You really mean that, Derpy?
Derpy: Of course!
"Um, well... is it okay if I..." the yellow pegasus tried to ask until the unicorn cut her off. "It's alright, Fluttershy!
Fallen: And it wouldn’t be a riffable story without committing that cardinal sin of having multiple speakers per paragraph.
twow: We still need my good friend here. Mr. Tense Change.
Fallen: Doesn’t sound like the kind of guy Twilight would get along with.
twow: Sure she would. She might ruthlessly murder him, but it’ll be OK.
Just remember to take care of yourself... we wouldn't want anything to happen to you..." Twilight said as she magically opened the door leading out from the cottage.
Fallen: Oh, that’s not ominous at ALL.
Derpy: Of course not Fallen! She’s just being kind to Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: Thank goodness! I was getting worried...
Fluttershy halted herself, having a slight problem understanding exactly what her friend meant by those words. But of course they had to be of the kind thoughts, what else?
twow: SURE.
So instead of any more unnecessary attempts, she waved a fore hoof from her comfortable sofa to the pony leaving her alone. Twilight peeped inside from the wide narrow in the door, still smiling reassuringly while she closed it again.
Fallen: A “she was never heard from again” joke would be in the absolute worst taste.
twow: So would a “ya don’t say” joke.
Out in the still warm evening air, the well-read mare took her first steps out in the little farm Fluttershy always took care of. But now when she was so deep in the pregnancy,
Fallen: So deep she could drown in it.
Applejack and Pinkie Pie had more than happily helped her with the animals while Rainbow Dash and Rarity took care of the necessary carpentry and shopping animal food.
Fallen: Not sure if there’s a word missing or the author meant “shipping.”
Fluttershy: ...shipping animal food?
Fallen: It’s probably happened.
twow: Probably shipped it with Rainbow.
Twilight glanced back at the cottage while she walked away from it, hoping her friend would find the curiosity to open her little gift. "No... we wouldn't want anything to happen to you... Fluttershy...".
Derpy: Didn’t she say that already?
Fluttershy: It’s reassuring that she cares enough to say it again.
twow: Even though she said it after she was outside the house?
In a sweet imagination and recall of old memories, Fluttershy found herself in her bedroom on the upper level of her humble home.
Fallen: Oh yeah, I took this off of Fanfiction.net. The FIMFic version, far as I know, doesn’t have this conception scene.
twow: Wait. There’s a scene that I HAVEN’T seen?!
Fallen: Don’t worry. It’s mostly new to me too.
She was laying in the bed, feeling more warm than ever inside her body as she looked around in the darkened room filled with tiny candlelight everywhere.
Fluttershy: I don’t know if burning candles is doing much to help the heat.
twow: It’s also a fire hazard. Your house isn’t made of brick.
She remembered where this was and realized her stomach was flat and fine, her thoughts and expectations rested on the appearance of an even finer stallion. And there he was, emerging from the darkness
Fallen: MUST... RESIST... BATMAN JOKE...
Derpy: Wait. So he’s Batman?
twow: (laughing) I knew it was a good idea to show you those movies!
Fluttershy: What movies?
Fallen: Ooh, Fluttershy, remind me about that when this is over. I’ve got three awesome movies I’d love for you girls to see.
Derpy: We could have a marathon, Fallen!
Fallen: ...I’ve come to not like that word, but I love the way you think!
twow: Given that we’re all sane at the end of this, we’d better watch those movies afterwards.
and getting up in bed, Big Macintosh.
Fluttershy: This... this won’t be like... (gulp) will it?
twow: If this is going where I think it is, EW.
Fallen: twow, it is, and Fluttershy, it’s not.
Derpy: Do I WANT to know?
Fallen: You do not.
A gentle kiss from the strong and sturdy muzzle, and she was already gone in the passion. Her eyes rolled back in ecstasy when his large body carefully laid over her to share his own heat with hers. The kissing grew intenser,
Fluttershy: That’s a word?
Derpy: Yup!
and soon his red forelegs searched for her flank just so he could adjust her correctly. She was dragged closer to his hardened erection, close enough for her sensitive marehood to receive its first kiss.
Fluttershy: ...at least it’s romantic?
twow: Dear Luna, why?!
Their loving eyes met together with two very fitting grins. And as Big mac laid his head over her shoulder, a faint gasp escaped Fluttershy's mouth. The appendage slipped in easily, breaking through her inner flesh to fill her with pleasure.
Fallen: I’m THIS close to making the tearing-hymen point again.
twow: Don’t.
But when the moaning was about to get serious and the thrusting even stronger... she felt a tickle in her snout.
twow: That’s a thing that happens during sex now.
"Ahh... AAHHH...AAAAHHHH... tjiu!".
Fallen: ...interesting onomatopoeia for a sneeze.
Derpy: I know! She could have gone, “Ah, AH, SHOFIHGROKLF”
twow: Derpy, I’m not even going to ASK how you did that.
Fallen: Probably learned it from Tommy Wiseau. He’s good at that, if literally nothing else.
The most adorable sneeze escaped Fluttershy's snout as she woke up. Her eyes flew up in a flash for her to discover what had interrupted her wonderful dream.
Fluttershy: ...the sneeze.
It was nothing she should be angry at, not even if she could. Because the very reason for her return from the dreamworld was a small butterfly who had decided to land on her snout only to fly away again.
twow: Or the butterfly.
Fallen: Which CAUSED the sneeze. So she’s still right.
"Oh... sorry, little friend. I wasn't prepared..." she apologized and giggled over her own silliness. It was at that moment she realized she had fallen asleep in the sofa soon after Twilight's exit.
Fallen: Great. We’ll never find her beneath all those cushions.
twow: At least the story will be over then.
She looked around, finally ending up looking out through the window. A question mark took form in her head when she saw Luna's moon in the darkened and star-filled canopy.
twow: How does that work?
Fallen: I imagine that’s what it would be like if the Riddler had superpowers.
She looked at the door, the bird nests and at Angel sleeping in his basket, understanding in a set of seconds that she was still surrounded by sleeping animals... all alone.
Derpy: If you ever wanna have a sleepover, I’ll come!
Fluttershy: That sounds like it would be nice.
"Um... Big Mac? Big Mac, are you here?" she called out without waking the animals. Sadly, she was answered with anything else but the mentioned pony's deep voice.
Fallen: He has learned the art of how not to be seen. One of the most important elements is not talking.
twow: He rarely talks anyway.
A cold and silent breeze swept past the entire room, seeming to have appeared from nowhere if it weren't for the open window right next to her. She shivered and decided it would be for the best to close it and get to bed.
Fallen: Yay, mundanity!
twow: I’m okay with that. Better than what’s coming up.
Done and done, she managed to get up even due to her round belly preventing most agile movements.
Fluttershy: Not that you need to be agile to close a window.
twow: What if it’s a big window?
Fluttershy: It shouldn’t matter that much. It’s just pushing or pulling it closed.
Her wings weren't strong enough to handle this weight, so they only served as supporters together with her forelegs.
Fallen: (snickers)
Fluttershy: What’s so funny?
Fallen: The thought of a pregnant pegasus trying to fly.
Derpy: Hey! It’s not easy!
She waggled up to the window and shut it, taking one last look through the glass in order to see if her stallion perhaps was close to the house. But he wasn't there, apparently he was still working with his chores at the farm,
Fluttershy: At night? Don’t they usually get all their work done before the sun sets?
twow: Yes. Even then, they would know how important you would be to him.
something Fluttershy knew was very important for the Apple family. However, she couldn't hide her disappointment, being so much weaker and defenseless than she usually was with this little thing growing inside her.
Fallen: Yeah, I’m sure the thought of her being weak and helpless makes what’s coming easier to accept.
twow: It doesn’t. It makes it WORSE.
Thus, she sighed and tried to find a source of consolation for the male's absence.
twow: If I say what just ran through my head, Fluttershy’s gonna slap the shit out of me.
Fluttershy: No I wouldn’t! Why would I do that?
twow: Because the thought was of you fiercely masturbating.
Fluttershy: (blushes furiously and backs away)
Perhaps something from the fridge to satisfy her hunger for the eleventh time today? Or perhaps...
Fallen: Oh god, I think the story’s going there too.
twow: Ew.
Derpy: Double ew.
It was not until then Fluttershy remembered the little blue box still lying all untouched on her little coffee table in front of the sofa she spent most days sitting on.
Fluttershy: Oh yeah, Twilight’s gift? I wonder why I still haven’t opened it...
twow: I wish that you wouldn’t.
Yes, opening it to find out what Twilight had brought her would surely calm her a little, especially if it was a card with a nice little text wishing her luck; she surely could use some more support right now.
Fallen: Suppressing a joke about Fluttershy being held up with support beams, and now we can continue.
twow: If I don’t get it, then I know Derpy won’t.
Derpy: Guess you could say that Fluttershy is really supported by her friends.
twow: Oh, that was bad. I’ve taught you well.
Thus, she took a few steps to the table and carefully sat down on the floor, reaching out with her fore hooves to grab the thin present beautifully decorated in a ribbon. She looked at it a little more, flipping it upside-down and gently squeezing it to determine what it actually was.
twow: Why do we squeeze presents anyway? It spoils the surprise!
Probably something on a piece of paper, she thought while biting the rosette to rip it off. As the bands fell to the floor, she unfolded the blue present paper piece by piece until it also fell to the floor,
Fallen: Is she one of those people who unwraps presents without tearing the paper?
Fluttershy: Sometimes. That’s more like Rarity, though.
twow: It’s funny, because I can picture that.
leaving her with the present in her hooves. It was indeed some kind of paper, but the things written on it was certainly nothing she expected...
Fallen: “Whoever wields this package, if he be worthy, shall possess the power of Thor.”
twow: “All shall stand, all shall fall.”
A bleach brown parchment with a black circle in the middle and mystic chantings scripted all around it. None of them made sense, not the crosses, the lines, not even the tiny scratches covering most of the paper. It was like a dictionary example of something taken from Zecora's inventory.
Fallen: Oh boy. Twilight’s a Satanist.
Fluttershy: ...a what?
twow: Imagine that Twilight worshipped Nightmare Moon.
Fallen: Yeah, but with less “Past Sins.”
Fluttershy: ...still what?
She cocked an eyebrow, unable to understand what this was all meant to be and what purpose it served.
Fallen: Not many people can understand gibberish.
Derpy: I can! Pinkie taught me how!
twow: That’s not a surprise.
Fallen: She also said you were taking fourth-wall lessons.
Derpy: Yeah well, I’m not supposed to talk about those.
But even more suddenly than when she remembered this present, her eyes slowly figured out the symbol in the middle of the large circle. It rested above a single line crossing past horizontally, perfectly placed in the middle like it measured the diameter.
Fallen: It just sat there, beckoning for a sacrifice of blood.
twow: VERY poor choice of words right there.
She narrowed her eyes and leaned close to it, pouting her lips like it would help for reasons she didn't know of.
"Advoco... voro...".
Fluttershy: What does that even mean?
Derpy: It means, “Enter if you dare.”
twow: You’re kidding.
She didn't know what it meant, but that's what it apparently said. But how could she read and understand it? This language wasn't of the Equestrian kind, and it made pretty much no sense no matter what she tried to come up with.
Fallen: Really? Because Derpy did a pretty good job.
Derpy: Thanks Fallen!
And just as her thoughts began to surround Twilight's intentions with this present, she only had time to widen her eyes in absolute shock and fright.
Fallen: It was Earth all along! DAMN YOU ALL TO HELL!
Derpy: I quite enjoy your planet Fallen.
Fallen: How did you even get to go there? And how related is it to the individual the rest of these ponies apparently know as Time Turner?
Fluttershy: The stallion you were accusing of being the Doctor?
Fallen: Tell me he doesn’t look like David Tennant!
Derpy: I went to Earth when I met twow. In fact, you won’t even believe where we riff.
Fallen: Is there ANOTHER next-door compound I don’t know about?
twow: If you count it being in the basement of my home.
Fallen: I don’t count it at all.
twow: Then have fun denying it to yourself.
Fallen: I meant as being next door to this armory. Unless you’re living in Equestria and I didn’t know.
twow: You didn’t. It’s like a foreign exchange program.
Derpy: twow! Hush! Luna’s gonna get mad!
twow: What? I trust Fallen. Kinda.
The line crossing past the circle opened, revealing a dark void in the middle of a pool of white filling the circle. And in that instance, all the drawn symbols illuminated a dark blue light, growing stronger for each passing second as the newly opened eye on the parchment moved around in a chaos.
Fallen: A chaos?
twow: What? I don’t even.
A swirling noise sounding like it absorbed and consumed something echoed out in the big room.
Fallen: Alright, who forgot to feed the eldritch abomination?
twow: Can it be classified as an animal? If so, that’s Fluttershy’s department.
"Aahhhh!" Fluttershy screamed in pure terror and dropped the parchment to the floor among the torn present paper and bands, mortified and utterly confused over what in Equestria this was.
Fluttershy: I don’t think that thing’s in Equestria.
twow: It’s on the floor of your house. It’s in Equestria.
She fell on her behind, hurting her back a little but none the less
Fallen: Shouldn’t that be one word?
Derpy: Yup!
preventing her to crawl backwards away from the scary object on the floor.
twow: I would be doing that also.
Derpy: You could also poke it with a stick.
twow: ....What?
The eye kept moving around as the chantings flashed brightly and finally imploded, adding the light it created to the eye for purposes unknown to the pegasus.
Fallen: But known all too well to me.
However, when the light had flashed by, the eye had turned into a vortex which expanded from the circle. After just a second, it widened into a hole of glimmering lights, big enough to fit a pony if it would be dumb enough to walk into it.
Fluttershy: Who would fall into a gaping dimensional rift like that, though?
twow: Ask Derpy how she came to Earth.
Fallen: Of COURSE it’d be Derpy.
Derpy: What do you mean by that Fallen?
Fallen: You kind of have a reputation for being clumsy. And your last visit reinforced that.
Derpy: It was a good thing this time! I met twow and now we have a great friendship!
twow: If you count being locked in your house half the time riffing stories a great friendship.
Fallen: That’s the foundation of most of my friendships here, so I count it.
twow: I wasn’t complaining about it. It’s just rather amusing.
As Fluttershy felt more fear tainting her heart, all of the animals in her woke up thanks to the strong light illuminating the room and the odd noises.
Fallen: I dare anyone to stay asleep when all hell is literally breaking loose.
Derpy: You should see when Dinky’s exhausted. twow knocked over a bunch of my dishes and she didn’t even MOVE.
twow: Yeah, I still owe you for that...
Birds flew out from their nests, critters escaped their little homes and ran all over the floor together with Angel who rose his head in an instance. He had already been awake since he heard Fluttershy's scream, but ignored it until now.
Fallen: Because he’s a caring and supportive pet.
Fluttershy: FALLEN!
twow: Little guy pushes you around all the time. Frankly, I’m surprised he didn’t get up, slap you for screaming and go back to sleep.
Fluttershy: TWOW!
Before a minute had passed, all the animals had escaped either to the upper level or in a dark corner where safety existed.
Fallen: Because there are still any of those lying around.
twow: Especially if the light is strong enough to wake every animal up.
As the vortex finally was wide enough to cover meters of space from the center, the yellow pegasus mare panted with beads of sweat breaking from her body.
Fallen: That’s the last time she’ll ever try jogging with child.
Fluttershy: FALLEN!
Fallen: You’re seriously still not used to this?
Derpy: You can’t imagine how many times I’ve yelled at twow. Also, jogging with child. Bad idea.
Fallen: With a horn in your belly? I can only imagine.
Derpy: Hurt.
twow: Guess you could say that Dinky was really “horny.” (slapped by Derpy)
Fallen: Seriously. WOW.
Derpy: Don’t. Do. That. Again.
She didn't understand anything else but the horror growing in her mind, aware that this couldn't be good. But it was not until the swirling noises died out that she understood something else was going to happen.
Fallen: That’s what happens when you taunt Happy Fun Ball.
twow and Derpy: WHAT.
The coat of glimmering dark blue light cracked like a water surface, allowing something totally different to emerge from the pool of obviously magic material. It rose high up in the air, almost reaching the ceiling as it slowly emerged together
Fallen: Your grasp on the language isn’t great, is it.
Derpy: He likes descriptions though.
with several identical looking things next to it.
Fallen: Not where it counts, clearly.
twow: Seems legit.
Fluttershy's entire body trembled, her jaw dropped and her eyebrows shot up. But as her eyes widened, they both reflected the monstrous being appearing from the magical pool.
Fallen: I’ll leave this bit to the imagination, but for now, I think we deserve a break.
EXTREME EXPLICITY.
Fluttershy: Is that even a word?
Fallen: Nope.
Some of you might find this arousing.
twow: Sure, if you’re a sick FUCK.
Some of you might find this disturbing.
Fallen: Yeah, that sounds more right.
Derpy: This isn’t gonna be good, is it?
twow: You’re a mother, correct? You’re REALLY gonna hate this.
No-one forced you to read this.
Fallen: Yeah... about that...
twow: Well, that’s bullshit!
Not for the faint of heart nor audience below 18.
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
twow: Not enough of a warning.
Momma Fluttershy
Fluttershy: I still say this title’s too innocent to be anything as bad as you’re saying it is.
twow: Fluttershy, you’re my favorite. This title is not even close to what happens in this.
Fluttershy: It looks like it’s just about me becoming a mother, though!
Fallen: Well... all I’ll say is that you’re not wrong.
twow: (shudders)
As the butterfly flew past a window in the late afternoon evening, it could for a moment enjoy the warm and soothing sunset in its wonderful orange and yellow. From the window of an isolated cottage at the borders of the Everfree forest, a very fine and modest pony known for her wonderful personality and adorable attitude to her surroundings beheld the beautiful horizon.
Fallen: Nice, humble beginnings. I have to be impressed with the descriptive language, if nothing else.
twow: This is gonna be one of those very few times that I wish a story didn’t have so many descriptions.
Fallen: Yeah, I long for Martin Willis now.
Fluttershy: (shudders)
Derpy: We should riff that twow!
twow: Sure. Just allow me to repair my shattered soul after we’re done with this.
Sure, she was among other things a renowned doormat, but aside from that also the kindest pegasus alive in the land of Equestria. Her smiling face could enjoy the last warm rays of today's sun, something she more than happily experienced from her comfortable sofa.
Fluttershy: Oh, you’re too kind...
Derpy: You’re not a doormat Fluttershy! Ponies don’t walk on you!
twow: Wrong type of doormat Derpy.
Fallen: At least, I HOPE it is...
"Fluttershy?" a voice asked from nowhere, disturbing the mentioned pony's perfect balance of harmony and peace.
twow: Guess she was meditating.
Fallen: And this is easily the least severe breach of peace in the story.
"Uh...? W-what was that, Twilight?" the yellow mare answered, concerned about her friend's presence and what she just said. "Oh, I'm so sorry! I... I dozed off..." she then apologized
Fallen: You don’t say.
with a slight blush over her pretty cheeks.
Derpy: You do have nice cheeks, Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: Th... thank you... I think...
twow: Derpy, what?
Derpy: What? I was just being nice!
The purple unicorn giggled and waved a fore hoof from her wooden chair which she had taken from the kitchen.
Fallen: Oh shit, she’s robbing you!
twow: It’s a chair.
Fallen: It’s not HER chair.
It was alright according to her, especially since she knew all about her friend's current condition. After all, it was she who incredibly had introduced this shy little thing to the mighty stallion among stallions, Big Macintosh.
Fluttershy: But I already know Big Macintosh.
twow: If I know basic shipping rules, you’re dating or married to him in this.
Fluttershy: Really? Well, at least it’s better than... well... (gulp)
He had done his part of the nature's cycle, contributing to what every mare and stallion before or later goes through...
Derpy: The first date?
Fallen: Puberty?
twow: Learning how to read?
"I wondered if the foal is doing well?" the lavender pony repeated in a calm tone, not minding at all that her friend missed that question.
Fluttershy looked deep into Twilight's eyes for a split second before glancing down at her swollen belly.
Fluttershy: Aww... I am going to be a mother!
Fallen: Yeah... about that...
twow: No! I can’t! I don’t wanna watch her read this!
Derpy: (pats twow on the back) It’s okay. We’ll get through this.
She was in the family way and had walked that path the past months. It all began with a magical night, when the hunk of a stallion and the beauty of a mare agreed in a warm embrace to finally unite their legacies into a new pony,
Fallen: Interesting way to put it.
twow: Ya mean sex?!
Fluttershy: Well, how else would I have gotten impregnated?
twow: You don’t want me to answer that.
Derpy: A bank?
twow: I might have told you a bit too much of our world, Derpy.
an offspring for them to call their own and love to the end of their days. Since then she had begged for the miracle of life to smite her, nurture the egg in her body during the lustful period of estrous so she now could sit her today
Fluttershy: What about my today?
Derpy: I think that was replaced with tomorrow.
with that round tummy.
Fluttershy gently caressed her precious belly with both fore hooves, reminded of what she soon would become as soon as the little life inside her was ready to wake up in the land of Equestria as another beloved subject to Celestia.
Fallen: Keep telling yourself that.
Derpy: I remember when I was pregnant with Dinky. That was a beautiful time.
A very happy smile struck her lips as she giggled back.
"It's... doing just fine. Won't be long until he or she is ready to come out"
Fluttershy: I would have liked to know the sex of the child beforehand.
twow: Out of curiosity, would you have rather had a boy or a girl?
Fluttershy: Oh, I’d hate to have to choose! It wouldn’t matter to me either way, since it would still be my child.
she said with a tone resembling excitement and joy, a tone Twilight couldn't resist cock her eyebrow at.
Fallen: Should be “cocking.” But it’s those little mistakes that’ll keep you sane throughout this.
twow: And makes it awkward.
"Aren't you... you know... scared that it will hurt when it's time? We all know how delicate you are..."
Derpy: Oh, it’s not all that bad. You know, once you get past the agonizing pain of pushing a full-sized foal out through your-
Fluttershy: I think you can stop now...
twow: Well, I could have died happy not knowing that.
the lavender mare did her best to not sound rude, smiling sheepishly to hide it further. But Fluttershy wasn't the pony made for such interpretations. She KNEW she was weak and defenseless when it came to such things.
Fallen: How, though, if she’s never given birth before?
twow: Ponies could tell her? Like Derpy was about to?
Derpy: Sorry.
Fallen: How bad is it to give birth to a unicorn, anyway? That horn must hurt like a bitch coming out.
Derpy: Well, if they succeed in positioning the head so it comes out first, it’s not as painful. If the horn scratches against the side like Dinky did...
twow: Ouch.
Fluttershy: Why are we still having this discussion!?
twow: It’s better than reading this.
However, the smile remained as she kept her eyes on her large stomach.
"No. I would be afraid in any other cases... but... when it comes to the idea of... having m-my own foal... I'll do anything for it"
Fallen: Would you fight off a tentacle demon from hell?
Fluttershy: WHAT!?
Fallen: Sorry. Jumping the gun a little bit.
she reassured before adjusting her sitting position; it wasn't so comfortable anymore. Meanwhile, Twilight smiled again and looked out through the window. She noticed right quick how long it had been since she came here. Just a few minutes ago.
Fallen: If it was a few minutes ago, how can you say you’ve been there a long time?
twow: Because of the reason. (slapped by Fallen)
"So... when is Big Macintosh coming back?" she suddenly asked, getting down from her chair in order to prepare for her leave without Fluttershy's knowledge.
Fallen: “I must go. My planet needs me.”
twow: “Let my ponies go!”
Fluttershy: ...I’m kind of lost.
Derpy: twow didn’t let me see that movie yet. I’m lost with you Fluttershy.
The pregnant pegasus sighed and looked out at the sunset too, not even doubting her beloved stallion would be late. "He said today's chores could take some time, and I thought it was okay since there's still a little less than a month left".
Fallen: See that? For a pregnant woman, that’s the equivalent of “two days until retirement.”
Derpy: Oh! I get that one!
Fallen: Great job, Derpy! Now think of the implications.
Derpy: ...Oh.
As she finished that sentence, her eyes glanced away at something her friend had brought with her, resting on the small table between them both.
Fluttershy: They left quietly so they wouldn’t disturb its sleep.
Derpy: Such a cute little thing.
A little blue box
Fallen: Sure, it LOOKS little, but wait ‘til you see the inside.
twow: FALLEN. STOP.
Fallen: It was a TARDIS joke, twow.
twow: Wonderful. Excuse me while I slam my head into a wall.
Derpy: Uhhhh...
Fallen: Just let him.
Derpy: No offense, but humans can’t deal with injuries like I can.
with a red band wrapping it from all sides and meeting in the middle by a little rosette.
Fluttershy spent a good five seconds beholding the ideal-looking present,
Fallen: Worshipping it as her new god.
Fluttershy: Wait, what?
twow: It’s okay Fluttershy. I should tell you about the time that I convinced Dinky that there was a muffin god. (slapped by Derpy)
Derpy: She came home holding a plastic muffin and telling me that we needed to bow before it!
Fallen: ...did you?
Derpy: Possibly...
twow: Oh Fallen, do I have a story to tell you... (slapped again by Derpy)
knowing she had forgotten to bring up the subject about it.
"Um, by the way, Twilight..." she asked gently so the lavender equine would look over her shoulder. "I just wanted to thank you for the present. W-what is it?".
Fluttershy: It’s a wrapped present. It’s supposed to be a surprise. If I wanted to know, I would open it.
twow: Yeah, about that...
Twilight looked at the little quadratic box. It was not wider than her own pad, yet so thin you'd wonder if it was just a card or something. Soon a smile revealed itself on her lips.
twow: “Don’t worry. I made it just for you.”
Fallen: Just... don’t do that.
twow: “Why don’t you... have a peek inside?”
Fallen: No, really, don’t.
Derpy: Is something wrong, Fallen?
Fallen: Extremely.
"Just a little thing for you and the foal... nothing special at all, but I thought you should have it"
Fluttershy: Oh! How thoughtful of Twilight!
twow: (sobs)
Derpy: Why are you so upset? It’s just a present.
twow: Fluttershy’s innocence. It’s about to get ripped to shreds.
Fluttershy: No offense, but... that’s not new for me...
twow: This is a whole new level of pain.
her response became before she turned back to the door she tried to exit. Fluttershy shifted her eyes between the little box and Twilight, unsure if to express her gratitude once again just to make sure her friend understood what this meant to her.
Fluttershy: Well... how do I know when I say “thank you” too many times and it just gets annoying? I don’t want to be annoying to somepony who just gave me an incredibly thoughtful gift...
twow: I severely doubt that anyone can find you annoying.
The other ponies inside her circle of friendship had already visited her several times to either congratulate or simply show their support to her. None of them doubted Fluttershy would be a wonderful mother.
Derpy: That is true, Fluttershy. You’re going to be a great mother!
Fluttershy: You really mean that, Derpy?
Derpy: Of course!
"Um, well... is it okay if I..." the yellow pegasus tried to ask until the unicorn cut her off. "It's alright, Fluttershy!
Fallen: And it wouldn’t be a riffable story without committing that cardinal sin of having multiple speakers per paragraph.
twow: We still need my good friend here. Mr. Tense Change.
Fallen: Doesn’t sound like the kind of guy Twilight would get along with.
twow: Sure she would. She might ruthlessly murder him, but it’ll be OK.
Just remember to take care of yourself... we wouldn't want anything to happen to you..." Twilight said as she magically opened the door leading out from the cottage.
Fallen: Oh, that’s not ominous at ALL.
Derpy: Of course not Fallen! She’s just being kind to Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: Thank goodness! I was getting worried...
Fluttershy halted herself, having a slight problem understanding exactly what her friend meant by those words. But of course they had to be of the kind thoughts, what else?
twow: SURE.
So instead of any more unnecessary attempts, she waved a fore hoof from her comfortable sofa to the pony leaving her alone. Twilight peeped inside from the wide narrow in the door, still smiling reassuringly while she closed it again.
Fallen: A “she was never heard from again” joke would be in the absolute worst taste.
twow: So would a “ya don’t say” joke.
Out in the still warm evening air, the well-read mare took her first steps out in the little farm Fluttershy always took care of. But now when she was so deep in the pregnancy,
Fallen: So deep she could drown in it.
Applejack and Pinkie Pie had more than happily helped her with the animals while Rainbow Dash and Rarity took care of the necessary carpentry and shopping animal food.
Fallen: Not sure if there’s a word missing or the author meant “shipping.”
Fluttershy: ...shipping animal food?
Fallen: It’s probably happened.
twow: Probably shipped it with Rainbow.
Twilight glanced back at the cottage while she walked away from it, hoping her friend would find the curiosity to open her little gift. "No... we wouldn't want anything to happen to you... Fluttershy...".
Derpy: Didn’t she say that already?
Fluttershy: It’s reassuring that she cares enough to say it again.
twow: Even though she said it after she was outside the house?
In a sweet imagination and recall of old memories, Fluttershy found herself in her bedroom on the upper level of her humble home.
Fallen: Oh yeah, I took this off of Fanfiction.net. The FIMFic version, far as I know, doesn’t have this conception scene.
twow: Wait. There’s a scene that I HAVEN’T seen?!
Fallen: Don’t worry. It’s mostly new to me too.
She was laying in the bed, feeling more warm than ever inside her body as she looked around in the darkened room filled with tiny candlelight everywhere.
Fluttershy: I don’t know if burning candles is doing much to help the heat.
twow: It’s also a fire hazard. Your house isn’t made of brick.
She remembered where this was and realized her stomach was flat and fine, her thoughts and expectations rested on the appearance of an even finer stallion. And there he was, emerging from the darkness
Fallen: MUST... RESIST... BATMAN JOKE...
Derpy: Wait. So he’s Batman?
twow: (laughing) I knew it was a good idea to show you those movies!
Fluttershy: What movies?
Fallen: Ooh, Fluttershy, remind me about that when this is over. I’ve got three awesome movies I’d love for you girls to see.
Derpy: We could have a marathon, Fallen!
Fallen: ...I’ve come to not like that word, but I love the way you think!
twow: Given that we’re all sane at the end of this, we’d better watch those movies afterwards.
and getting up in bed, Big Macintosh.
Fluttershy: This... this won’t be like... (gulp) will it?
twow: If this is going where I think it is, EW.
Fallen: twow, it is, and Fluttershy, it’s not.
Derpy: Do I WANT to know?
Fallen: You do not.
A gentle kiss from the strong and sturdy muzzle, and she was already gone in the passion. Her eyes rolled back in ecstasy when his large body carefully laid over her to share his own heat with hers. The kissing grew intenser,
Fluttershy: That’s a word?
Derpy: Yup!
and soon his red forelegs searched for her flank just so he could adjust her correctly. She was dragged closer to his hardened erection, close enough for her sensitive marehood to receive its first kiss.
Fluttershy: ...at least it’s romantic?
twow: Dear Luna, why?!
Their loving eyes met together with two very fitting grins. And as Big mac laid his head over her shoulder, a faint gasp escaped Fluttershy's mouth. The appendage slipped in easily, breaking through her inner flesh to fill her with pleasure.
Fallen: I’m THIS close to making the tearing-hymen point again.
twow: Don’t.
But when the moaning was about to get serious and the thrusting even stronger... she felt a tickle in her snout.
twow: That’s a thing that happens during sex now.
"Ahh... AAHHH...AAAAHHHH... tjiu!".
Fallen: ...interesting onomatopoeia for a sneeze.
Derpy: I know! She could have gone, “Ah, AH, SHOFIHGROKLF”
twow: Derpy, I’m not even going to ASK how you did that.
Fallen: Probably learned it from Tommy Wiseau. He’s good at that, if literally nothing else.
The most adorable sneeze escaped Fluttershy's snout as she woke up. Her eyes flew up in a flash for her to discover what had interrupted her wonderful dream.
Fluttershy: ...the sneeze.
It was nothing she should be angry at, not even if she could. Because the very reason for her return from the dreamworld was a small butterfly who had decided to land on her snout only to fly away again.
twow: Or the butterfly.
Fallen: Which CAUSED the sneeze. So she’s still right.
"Oh... sorry, little friend. I wasn't prepared..." she apologized and giggled over her own silliness. It was at that moment she realized she had fallen asleep in the sofa soon after Twilight's exit.
Fallen: Great. We’ll never find her beneath all those cushions.
twow: At least the story will be over then.
She looked around, finally ending up looking out through the window. A question mark took form in her head when she saw Luna's moon in the darkened and star-filled canopy.
twow: How does that work?
Fallen: I imagine that’s what it would be like if the Riddler had superpowers.
She looked at the door, the bird nests and at Angel sleeping in his basket, understanding in a set of seconds that she was still surrounded by sleeping animals... all alone.
Derpy: If you ever wanna have a sleepover, I’ll come!
Fluttershy: That sounds like it would be nice.
"Um... Big Mac? Big Mac, are you here?" she called out without waking the animals. Sadly, she was answered with anything else but the mentioned pony's deep voice.
Fallen: He has learned the art of how not to be seen. One of the most important elements is not talking.
twow: He rarely talks anyway.
A cold and silent breeze swept past the entire room, seeming to have appeared from nowhere if it weren't for the open window right next to her. She shivered and decided it would be for the best to close it and get to bed.
Fallen: Yay, mundanity!
twow: I’m okay with that. Better than what’s coming up.
Done and done, she managed to get up even due to her round belly preventing most agile movements.
Fluttershy: Not that you need to be agile to close a window.
twow: What if it’s a big window?
Fluttershy: It shouldn’t matter that much. It’s just pushing or pulling it closed.
Her wings weren't strong enough to handle this weight, so they only served as supporters together with her forelegs.
Fallen: (snickers)
Fluttershy: What’s so funny?
Fallen: The thought of a pregnant pegasus trying to fly.
Derpy: Hey! It’s not easy!
She waggled up to the window and shut it, taking one last look through the glass in order to see if her stallion perhaps was close to the house. But he wasn't there, apparently he was still working with his chores at the farm,
Fluttershy: At night? Don’t they usually get all their work done before the sun sets?
twow: Yes. Even then, they would know how important you would be to him.
something Fluttershy knew was very important for the Apple family. However, she couldn't hide her disappointment, being so much weaker and defenseless than she usually was with this little thing growing inside her.
Fallen: Yeah, I’m sure the thought of her being weak and helpless makes what’s coming easier to accept.
twow: It doesn’t. It makes it WORSE.
Thus, she sighed and tried to find a source of consolation for the male's absence.
twow: If I say what just ran through my head, Fluttershy’s gonna slap the shit out of me.
Fluttershy: No I wouldn’t! Why would I do that?
twow: Because the thought was of you fiercely masturbating.
Fluttershy: (blushes furiously and backs away)
Perhaps something from the fridge to satisfy her hunger for the eleventh time today? Or perhaps...
Fallen: Oh god, I think the story’s going there too.
twow: Ew.
Derpy: Double ew.
It was not until then Fluttershy remembered the little blue box still lying all untouched on her little coffee table in front of the sofa she spent most days sitting on.
Fluttershy: Oh yeah, Twilight’s gift? I wonder why I still haven’t opened it...
twow: I wish that you wouldn’t.
Yes, opening it to find out what Twilight had brought her would surely calm her a little, especially if it was a card with a nice little text wishing her luck; she surely could use some more support right now.
Fallen: Suppressing a joke about Fluttershy being held up with support beams, and now we can continue.
twow: If I don’t get it, then I know Derpy won’t.
Derpy: Guess you could say that Fluttershy is really supported by her friends.
twow: Oh, that was bad. I’ve taught you well.
Thus, she took a few steps to the table and carefully sat down on the floor, reaching out with her fore hooves to grab the thin present beautifully decorated in a ribbon. She looked at it a little more, flipping it upside-down and gently squeezing it to determine what it actually was.
twow: Why do we squeeze presents anyway? It spoils the surprise!
Probably something on a piece of paper, she thought while biting the rosette to rip it off. As the bands fell to the floor, she unfolded the blue present paper piece by piece until it also fell to the floor,
Fallen: Is she one of those people who unwraps presents without tearing the paper?
Fluttershy: Sometimes. That’s more like Rarity, though.
twow: It’s funny, because I can picture that.
leaving her with the present in her hooves. It was indeed some kind of paper, but the things written on it was certainly nothing she expected...
Fallen: “Whoever wields this package, if he be worthy, shall possess the power of Thor.”
twow: “All shall stand, all shall fall.”
A bleach brown parchment with a black circle in the middle and mystic chantings scripted all around it. None of them made sense, not the crosses, the lines, not even the tiny scratches covering most of the paper. It was like a dictionary example of something taken from Zecora's inventory.
Fallen: Oh boy. Twilight’s a Satanist.
Fluttershy: ...a what?
twow: Imagine that Twilight worshipped Nightmare Moon.
Fallen: Yeah, but with less “Past Sins.”
Fluttershy: ...still what?
She cocked an eyebrow, unable to understand what this was all meant to be and what purpose it served.
Fallen: Not many people can understand gibberish.
Derpy: I can! Pinkie taught me how!
twow: That’s not a surprise.
Fallen: She also said you were taking fourth-wall lessons.
Derpy: Yeah well, I’m not supposed to talk about those.
But even more suddenly than when she remembered this present, her eyes slowly figured out the symbol in the middle of the large circle. It rested above a single line crossing past horizontally, perfectly placed in the middle like it measured the diameter.
Fallen: It just sat there, beckoning for a sacrifice of blood.
twow: VERY poor choice of words right there.
She narrowed her eyes and leaned close to it, pouting her lips like it would help for reasons she didn't know of.
"Advoco... voro...".
Fluttershy: What does that even mean?
Derpy: It means, “Enter if you dare.”
twow: You’re kidding.
She didn't know what it meant, but that's what it apparently said. But how could she read and understand it? This language wasn't of the Equestrian kind, and it made pretty much no sense no matter what she tried to come up with.
Fallen: Really? Because Derpy did a pretty good job.
Derpy: Thanks Fallen!
And just as her thoughts began to surround Twilight's intentions with this present, she only had time to widen her eyes in absolute shock and fright.
Fallen: It was Earth all along! DAMN YOU ALL TO HELL!
Derpy: I quite enjoy your planet Fallen.
Fallen: How did you even get to go there? And how related is it to the individual the rest of these ponies apparently know as Time Turner?
Fluttershy: The stallion you were accusing of being the Doctor?
Fallen: Tell me he doesn’t look like David Tennant!
Derpy: I went to Earth when I met twow. In fact, you won’t even believe where we riff.
Fallen: Is there ANOTHER next-door compound I don’t know about?
twow: If you count it being in the basement of my home.
Fallen: I don’t count it at all.
twow: Then have fun denying it to yourself.
Fallen: I meant as being next door to this armory. Unless you’re living in Equestria and I didn’t know.
twow: You didn’t. It’s like a foreign exchange program.
Derpy: twow! Hush! Luna’s gonna get mad!
twow: What? I trust Fallen. Kinda.
The line crossing past the circle opened, revealing a dark void in the middle of a pool of white filling the circle. And in that instance, all the drawn symbols illuminated a dark blue light, growing stronger for each passing second as the newly opened eye on the parchment moved around in a chaos.
Fallen: A chaos?
twow: What? I don’t even.
A swirling noise sounding like it absorbed and consumed something echoed out in the big room.
Fallen: Alright, who forgot to feed the eldritch abomination?
twow: Can it be classified as an animal? If so, that’s Fluttershy’s department.
"Aahhhh!" Fluttershy screamed in pure terror and dropped the parchment to the floor among the torn present paper and bands, mortified and utterly confused over what in Equestria this was.
Fluttershy: I don’t think that thing’s in Equestria.
twow: It’s on the floor of your house. It’s in Equestria.
She fell on her behind, hurting her back a little but none the less
Fallen: Shouldn’t that be one word?
Derpy: Yup!
preventing her to crawl backwards away from the scary object on the floor.
twow: I would be doing that also.
Derpy: You could also poke it with a stick.
twow: ....What?
The eye kept moving around as the chantings flashed brightly and finally imploded, adding the light it created to the eye for purposes unknown to the pegasus.
Fallen: But known all too well to me.
However, when the light had flashed by, the eye had turned into a vortex which expanded from the circle. After just a second, it widened into a hole of glimmering lights, big enough to fit a pony if it would be dumb enough to walk into it.
Fluttershy: Who would fall into a gaping dimensional rift like that, though?
twow: Ask Derpy how she came to Earth.
Fallen: Of COURSE it’d be Derpy.
Derpy: What do you mean by that Fallen?
Fallen: You kind of have a reputation for being clumsy. And your last visit reinforced that.
Derpy: It was a good thing this time! I met twow and now we have a great friendship!
twow: If you count being locked in your house half the time riffing stories a great friendship.
Fallen: That’s the foundation of most of my friendships here, so I count it.
twow: I wasn’t complaining about it. It’s just rather amusing.
As Fluttershy felt more fear tainting her heart, all of the animals in her woke up thanks to the strong light illuminating the room and the odd noises.
Fallen: I dare anyone to stay asleep when all hell is literally breaking loose.
Derpy: You should see when Dinky’s exhausted. twow knocked over a bunch of my dishes and she didn’t even MOVE.
twow: Yeah, I still owe you for that...
Birds flew out from their nests, critters escaped their little homes and ran all over the floor together with Angel who rose his head in an instance. He had already been awake since he heard Fluttershy's scream, but ignored it until now.
Fallen: Because he’s a caring and supportive pet.
Fluttershy: FALLEN!
twow: Little guy pushes you around all the time. Frankly, I’m surprised he didn’t get up, slap you for screaming and go back to sleep.
Fluttershy: TWOW!
Before a minute had passed, all the animals had escaped either to the upper level or in a dark corner where safety existed.
Fallen: Because there are still any of those lying around.
twow: Especially if the light is strong enough to wake every animal up.
As the vortex finally was wide enough to cover meters of space from the center, the yellow pegasus mare panted with beads of sweat breaking from her body.
Fallen: That’s the last time she’ll ever try jogging with child.
Fluttershy: FALLEN!
Fallen: You’re seriously still not used to this?
Derpy: You can’t imagine how many times I’ve yelled at twow. Also, jogging with child. Bad idea.
Fallen: With a horn in your belly? I can only imagine.
Derpy: Hurt.
twow: Guess you could say that Dinky was really “horny.” (slapped by Derpy)
Fallen: Seriously. WOW.
Derpy: Don’t. Do. That. Again.
She didn't understand anything else but the horror growing in her mind, aware that this couldn't be good. But it was not until the swirling noises died out that she understood something else was going to happen.
Fallen: That’s what happens when you taunt Happy Fun Ball.
twow and Derpy: WHAT.
The coat of glimmering dark blue light cracked like a water surface, allowing something totally different to emerge from the pool of obviously magic material. It rose high up in the air, almost reaching the ceiling as it slowly emerged together
Fallen: Your grasp on the language isn’t great, is it.
Derpy: He likes descriptions though.
with several identical looking things next to it.
Fallen: Not where it counts, clearly.
twow: Seems legit.
Fluttershy's entire body trembled, her jaw dropped and her eyebrows shot up. But as her eyes widened, they both reflected the monstrous being appearing from the magical pool.
Fallen: I’ll leave this bit to the imagination, but for now, I think we deserve a break.
Fallen: I’m not gonna bother asking twow, since he knows where this is going a hell of a lot better than any of you do, but how are you two holding up?
Fluttershy: Well... the sex scene was a little startling, and I’m not sure how comfortable I am with this otherworldly terror, but it’s not as bad as you’ve been saying.
Derpy: I have to agree with Fluttershy, Fallen. It just seems like a really weird story.
(Everyone stops as they hear a pounding on the wall.)
Fallen: ...the hell?
(twow comes back, a bruise on his head.)
Derpy: twow!
twow: I’m good. It seems that we’re holding up rather well. No one broke yet.
Fallen: No one but you. Again.
twow: Please. If I was broken, you would know. RIGHT.
Fallen: O...kay. All that aside, Derpy, I’m a bit curious about something. Something I didn’t really want to ask about when you were here a few months ago.
Fluttershy: Fallen, if this is the Doctor thing, I really think you should drop it.
Fallen: Nope. I know what I heard, I know who I heard it from, and it’s been bugging me ever since.
Derpy: What’s up then?
Fallen: Time Turner. The Doctor. Beans. Spill them.
Derpy: What all do you want to know?
Fallen: How much time have you been spending with him, at least before you met twow? Because I’m absolutely positive you’ve known him for a while.
Derpy: Well, if you can believe it, he’s Dinky’s father.
Fluttershy: You didn’t know that, Fallen? She and Time Turner haven’t really been secretive about it.
twow: Even I knew about it. And that was before Derpy told me. Although it kinda was even clearer when she asked me to babysit Dinky for her. THAT was an interesting night.
Fallen: So if I’m right about Time Turner... then Dinky’s part Time Lord.
Derpy: Yup!
Fallen: That’s just so many kinds of awesome. See, Fluttershy? I TOLD you!
twow: Isn’t it though? The Doctor and I have had a few interesting conversations about it.
Fluttershy: But- but I thought Doctor Who was just some television show! How could the Doctor not only be real, but actually be somepony I know!?
twow: The same way you all exist.
Fallen: Exactly. You remember seeing Friendship Is Magic on the Netflix listing, don’t you?
Fluttershy: Oh...
Derpy: Speaking of that, why did they change my voice?!
Fallen: It’s a long, sad story. I don’t want to depress you with the details.
Derpy: We have time, don’t we?
(Buzzer sounds.)
twow: There’s your answer.
All: We’ve got story sign!
Fluttershy: Well... the sex scene was a little startling, and I’m not sure how comfortable I am with this otherworldly terror, but it’s not as bad as you’ve been saying.
Derpy: I have to agree with Fluttershy, Fallen. It just seems like a really weird story.
(Everyone stops as they hear a pounding on the wall.)
Fallen: ...the hell?
(twow comes back, a bruise on his head.)
Derpy: twow!
twow: I’m good. It seems that we’re holding up rather well. No one broke yet.
Fallen: No one but you. Again.
twow: Please. If I was broken, you would know. RIGHT.
Fallen: O...kay. All that aside, Derpy, I’m a bit curious about something. Something I didn’t really want to ask about when you were here a few months ago.
Fluttershy: Fallen, if this is the Doctor thing, I really think you should drop it.
Fallen: Nope. I know what I heard, I know who I heard it from, and it’s been bugging me ever since.
Derpy: What’s up then?
Fallen: Time Turner. The Doctor. Beans. Spill them.
Derpy: What all do you want to know?
Fallen: How much time have you been spending with him, at least before you met twow? Because I’m absolutely positive you’ve known him for a while.
Derpy: Well, if you can believe it, he’s Dinky’s father.
Fluttershy: You didn’t know that, Fallen? She and Time Turner haven’t really been secretive about it.
twow: Even I knew about it. And that was before Derpy told me. Although it kinda was even clearer when she asked me to babysit Dinky for her. THAT was an interesting night.
Fallen: So if I’m right about Time Turner... then Dinky’s part Time Lord.
Derpy: Yup!
Fallen: That’s just so many kinds of awesome. See, Fluttershy? I TOLD you!
twow: Isn’t it though? The Doctor and I have had a few interesting conversations about it.
Fluttershy: But- but I thought Doctor Who was just some television show! How could the Doctor not only be real, but actually be somepony I know!?
twow: The same way you all exist.
Fallen: Exactly. You remember seeing Friendship Is Magic on the Netflix listing, don’t you?
Fluttershy: Oh...
Derpy: Speaking of that, why did they change my voice?!
Fallen: It’s a long, sad story. I don’t want to depress you with the details.
Derpy: We have time, don’t we?
(Buzzer sounds.)
twow: There’s your answer.
All: We’ve got story sign!
Four dark green, vine-looking limbs, all coated in an unknown substance dripping from them like sticky liquid.
Fluttershy: EEP!
Fallen: Not sure whether I should make a hentai joke or a Cthulhu joke.
twow: Oh dear Luna, NO.
Derpy: You favor Luna, don’t you?
twow: How have you not figured that out? It’s the same way that Fluttershy’s my favorite.
Fallen: And you don’t think saying that repeatedly while Derpy’s sitting right there is gonna make her jealous?
twow: Not when I’ve told her already that she’s my favorite pony that isn’t one of the Elements of Harmony.
Derpy: He said it’s like an equal amount of favorite. It makes sense now!
They all reached out several meters and swayed lightly from left to right to keep their balance. All of them crocked like they had necks and instantly pointed at Fluttershy, revealing their tight orifices at the end of each tentacle.
Fallen: Oh, crap. Those are the tentacles that are supposed to bite your dick off. Twilight got the wrong ones.
All but Fallen: WHAT?!
They had no suction cups, so they couldn't be that of an octopus, sadly enough confusing the defenseless mare even more.
"Wh... wha... what... w-what?"
Fallen: Doing the Doctor proud.
Derpy: He DOES say that a lot. It was funny when I took his screwdriver and blew up the stove.
she exclaimed and almost broke out in tears from the mere sight of the disgusting vine-looking things.
Fallen: And now I’m imagining her getting raped by Venusaur.
Fluttershy: Please stop talking...
Derpy: Dang it! He’s level 45!
twow: Yeah... I taught her how to play that...
Fallen: That’d actually be AWESOME for Fluttershy!
But the appendages didn't pay any attention to her puny voice, instead arched forward as the first one shot at her like a whip. The mare squealed in fear as the wet and agile tentacle wrapped itself around her left hindleg and clenched, summoning a faint signal of pain to Fluttershy's brain.
Fallen: “Come in, HQ. This is Back Left. Transmitting pain, over.”
twow: This is gonna hurt.
Before she could react to what was going on, another of the slithery monsters whipped away to grab her other hindleg, now paralyzing her ability to get away at all.
Fallen: The tentacle porn jokes really make themselves when you’re actually LOOKING at it.
Derpy: Ew.
Fallen: I know.
"No! No! What... what are you doing?" she hollered out as the rivers from her eyes expressed the sorrow, showing her rejection to this so far aggressive behavior.
twow: It’s hugging you. EVERYWHERE.
The slippery tentacles which held onto her hindlegs tensed, attempting to spread her limbs. Her screams intensified when the only possible image in her head started to become reality, thus her very reason for struggling back by floundering her hindlegs.
Fallen: She’s thinking it too.
Fluttershy: I can’t help it...
twow: Go to your happy place.
But no matter how hard she tried, the forelegs couldn't help due to the preciousness in her stomach preventing such actions.
Fallen: The only time anyone should ever rightfully think to themselves “FUCK this baby!”
Derpy: FALLEN!
Fallen: Right on cue.
Instead she could just grunt while helplessly trying to reach her suspended legs.
Without any greater resistance, the two unoccupied tentacles threw themselves towards the two remaining targets in order to completely release the poor mare from all kind of mobility aside from her weak wings.
Fallen: That actually reminds me... they never restrain her wings. I never understood why not.
twow: Because they wouldn’t have been able to do shit anyway.
In the snap of a second, their slippery flesh surrounded the pony's soft fur and certainly more drier
Fallen: Seriously? “More drier?”
Derpy: I know! It should have been, “More dryest!”
skin, locking themselves around her fetlocks like she wore chained cuffs.
In the next moment, Fluttershy realized just how trapped she actually was. Now the slimy limbs could move her just the way they wanted,
Fallen: Skeletal restrictions be damned!
twow: Ouch?
and the first thing on their list was to finally separate her hindlegs from each other, opening wide for her pretty marehood to get exposed right in front of the illuminating pool her violators came from.
Fluttershy: WHAT!?
twow: FUCK. This is going to break me again. It’s worse because Fluttershy’s here also. Last time it was just you all.
The tentacles used more force by pressing down her forelegs mercilessly to the floor, giving her the position as if she already was going to give birth here and now.
Fallen: Now, Fluttershy, when Cthulhu tells you to push- (smacked by Fluttershy) Whoa, WHAT!?
twow: Oh shit. I’m going to not say anything about this now.
The terror was already consuming enough for Fluttershy. Feeling this abandoned and scared at once was really nothing new for her, but this time it came with such an intense wave. For a moment, she thought they were actually going to kill her.
Fallen: That’s later.
Fluttershy: W-what do they do now?
Fallen: It lessens the impact if I try to explain it.
twow: Don’t worry, I can do it. Now Fluttershy... (smacked by Pinkie) WHAT.
Pinkie: (from TV) No spoilers!
Fallen: HOW THE FU-
That was until she opened her teary eyes and accidentally glanced at the magic circle emerging from the floor.
twow: “It was so beautiful..”
Fallen: I’m imagining the monolith from 2001: A Space Odyssey.
Derpy: Love that movie.
Fallen: I KNOW, right?
From the middle of the four already summoned beings, another three identical ones slithered up from the seemingly bottomless vortex, raising up in an arched position to aim a little lower and more precise at the middle.
Fallen: Oh, THESE are the rapey ones.
twow: There’s other kinds?!
Fallen: Don’t feign ignorance. You know what’s coming.
The suspended mare gasped as the additions moved slowly towards her spread thighs, causing her to scream out in her highest pitch when the event turned from bad to nightmarish.
Fallen: Freddy Krueger’s just sitting on the sidelines with popcorn.
twow: That just reminded me of when I read this in the Skype call, and now I want to murder you all over again.
Derpy: twow! That’s not nice!
Fallen: In his defense, neither am I.
Derpy: Then why are you two friends?
Fallen: ...can I get back to you on that?
Derpy: I’m bringing this back up at the next break.
Fallen: Trust me, we’ll have more problems than that by the time we reach that point.
Her lungs almost overexerted themselves until one of the three idle monsters twitched to her ear-cracking noise. Just like that, it jumped over her body, aiming straight into the wide-open hole causing that annoying noise.
Fluttershy: Why is this happening!?
twow: Because of the bloody reason.
"AAAHhglmph...!" her voice choked instantly with the fat and sticky appendage stuffing her mouth full of alien flesh, going all the way down her throat for just a second before sliding up again. Fluttershy coughed from the violent attack, stunned long enough for the two other tentacles to peacefully reach her nether lips.
Fallen: I’m kind of disgusted that they’d use the word “peacefully.”
twow: That word shouldn’t even exist in this story.
The innocent eyes kept crying, especially when they opened wide in pain and furthered denial. As her labia split up, so did her sphincter from the intruders. Their already slippery skin proved to have no problems breaking through the tight openings, easily sliding inside each warm hole to explore her inner flesh while causing her pain and agony.
Fluttershy: This is worse than “Rarity’s Generous Plan!”
Fallen: You’re completely right, but you’re also saying it too early.
Derpy: This gets WORSE?!
Fallen: Like you wouldn’t believe.
The pony couldn't fight back. All her ability was to lie there, completely suspended while her mouth, marehood and anal
Fallen: I don’t think you’re using that word right.
were unwillingly penetrated, choking her with disgusting meat and violating her sacred grounds.
twow and Derpy: WHAT?!
Fallen: I know! Who rapes a church?
All but Fallen: FALLEN!
Fluttershy felt shame when the extremely vague pulses of pleasure moved inside her senses. These tentacles were at least as big as her stallion, if not even larger.
Fluttershy: (whimpering)
twow: It’s okay Fluttershy, it can’t touch you.
Fallen: Well, unless I had a printed copy of the story...
twow: I WILL DESTROY EVERYTHING YOU LOVE.
Sadly, she didn't like how fast the other one in her rectum moved.
Once it dug deeper to enlarge the rest of her warm anal, a shriek of ache bucked her mind to no end.
Fallen: Great, her EARS too?
Derpy: I don’t think that’s possible, I hope.
Fallen: That’s exactly what Jimmy kept screaming when he got beaten to death with his own skull...
twow: ...What.
She twisted and jerked her head all ways possible, searching for any way to break loose from this scene of rape. But the constricting tentacles just tensed further to keep her in place while the others kept working.
Fallen: This is the bane of any visual reader’s existence.
twow: So this is why I’m dying inside.
The one inside her stuffed pink slit moved further inside, pushing aside all blocking flesh to reach even deeper inside.
Fallen: Are you sure you said “inside” enough times?
twow: I guess the author wanted us to have all of the inside information. (slapped by everyone)
Being the very pony who this abomination was inside,
Fallen: Huh. Guess not.
Fluttershy grit her teeth for each inch it slithered and moved around in her inner walls.
Fallen: Biting off the one in her mouth in the process.
Fluttershy: EW!
Derpy: It’s gotta be better than having it rape your mouth!
The one inside her behind didn't got much deeper than a few inches before it started moving around carefully, like it waited for the tight rectum to get used to its large size. But the so far most disgusting part was without doubt the tentacle in her mouth, jerking and waving back and forth in her mouth like she was giving it a serious blowjob without her actually doing anything at all but receiving.
Fallen: And that’s just LAZY.
All but Fallen: FALLEN!
Fallen: Can you blame me for fighting fire with fire?
twow: I think we all can.
She almost put a little focus on what it tasted like, but it was completely unidentified. Was this how magic tasted?
Fallen: Like octopus and semen?
Fluttershy: (resisting urge to vomit)
Derpy: (smacks Fallen)
The pegasus suddenly gasped and relaxed her filled mouth. The long appendage in her female cavern
Fallen: I feel like I need a euphemism thesaurus. These are getting weird.
had reached its end, the opening to the womb.
Derpy: Without going into details, this isn’t how my first time went.
twow: You mean, with the Doctor? (smacked by Derpy) Hey! That was just a question!
Derpy: That I didn’t like.
At that moment, the tentacle in her mouth stopped moving too, simply remaining in her mouth all still. Fluttershy's muffled whimpering and slight grunts didn't get anywhere in the air when a large dosage of excruciating fear woke up.
Fallen: The fear then rushed out the door. It was gonna get fired if it was late again!
twow: Musta had the same alarm clock Coal had.
That disgusting thing was just a few inches away from her foal. Her eyes moved ever so slowly down to her belly, begging to Celestia nothing would happen now.
Fallen: Those prayers obviously fell on deaf ears.
twow: Duh. She SHOULD have prayed to Luna. It was at night, after all.
The tentacle had stopped moving after bumping into her very small and tight opening, remaining still for several seconds to further the poor mare's moment of absolute fear. There was no way it could get inside, however.
Fallen: Someone put a womb in its way.
twow: I almost stabbed you with one of your own sawblades.
Derpy: (holding sawblade) I can do it!
twow: Derpy! Put that down!
After the short moment of stillness and silence, the sticky appendage ripped out from her inside in an instant, rippling out a quick shot of pain in Fluttershy's brain as she threw her head back with a groan. The tentacle slipped back in the dark blue pool of magic substance, disappearing as its role apparently was over.
Fallen: “Alright, Fred, that was your character’s only scene. Collect your paycheck on the way out.”
Fluttershy panted, relieved that it finally was out of her inner.
Fallen: Who uses ADJECTIVES as nouns? Verbs are where it’s at.
Derpy: VERB! That’s what’s happening!
twow: It sucks that Fluttershy’s unable to flutter out of this situation. (slapped by Fluttershy) Okay, I deserved that one.
She could still feel the very uncomfortable intruder in her rectum, but that sort of pain was excluded and ignored when her concern for the baby suddenly took up all place. And the one in her mouth was actually not so disturbing anymore. It was like it didn't exist there for a moment.
Fallen: Must be an acquired taste. (slapped by Fluttershy) Oh, COME ON!
twow: She’s slapping everyone today. Fluttershy has her own dark side.
Her tired head and body had already reached their limits in what they could take, but she still felt this wasn't really over yet. Did those things came her
Fallen: I’m starting to doubt English was his first language.
Derpy: Maybe his first language was Griffon?
just to dig inside her orifices and then leave? Then why were the other ones still here holding all four of her legs?
She was just a second from finding out...
Fluttershy: ...did someone time it?
Fallen: Oh god. This is where it starts to get fucked up.
twow: Pinkie will pay for this. In blood.
Fallen: She’ll bleed for us both.
Derpy: twow? Fallen? Relax.
Her ears picked up a sound coming from the dark blue glimmering pool, so she looked up from the floor again to see her swollen stomach blocking the sight of the creepy hole in the floor. As she watched, a new appendage with the same thickness and agile movement appeared.
Fallen: Yeah. Most of the time, tentacles on one creature are the same length as all the others.
twow: Let’s NOT question tentacle logic.
Only this one had already differed itself from the others by making slight screeching noises. Fluttershy felt shivers up her spine as the awful noises sounding like a strangled animal aimed at her.
Fallen: The strangled noises missed their mark, however, and crashed into a nearby tree.
twow: I wish.
It was then she saw the absolutely biggest difference. Instead of just a small orifice dripping an unknown fluid, two sets of razor sharp teeth decorated the face of this tentacle, opening its mouth wide to reveal the other sets deeper inside its long, damp body. All of the upper rows dripped what seemed to be some sort of saliva, pouring out from the mouth to the floor.
Derpy: Remember what I said about relaxing? Forget that.
Fallen: Hello, Attack of the Giant Leeches flashbacks.
In the background of its own horrifying screech, Fluttershy hollered out from the top of her lungs when this ultimate form of monstrosity from her imagination
Fallen: ...so it’s a dream? If so, where the FUCK is Luna!?
twow: Obviously NOT doing her damn job.
plunged towards her fragile sex.
All: NO!
It was more brutal and merciless than the previous one, mauling past her sensitive flesh. The screams from her mouth weren't heard, but her teeth chewed on the medium soft flesh in her mouth. The tentacle slipped out from her mouth, flinging itself around to escape the pain, giving the orifice it was supposed to silence an opportunity to scream out in pain.
Fluttershy: (yelps)
Fallen: How long’s it been since she was able to form words?
twow: Way too long.
"Aaahhhh! No! Aaahhhh, please stoooop!" her desperate and high-pitched voice yelled, fully ignored by the new intruder in her marehood. She kept roaring, it kept going further.
Fallen: With this guy’s description of depth, it’s hard not to imagine her vagina as a bag of infinite holding.
Derpy: How do the girls stand you sometimes?
Fallen: I wasn’t aware that they did.
twow: THAT’S not a surprise.
Finally it hit her womb, bumping with a slam into the insignificant opening. Fluttershy grimaced from the utter ache that brought, one again silenced as she looked down at the remaining body outside of her female sex.
Fallen: She didn’t like the way it was staring at her.
twow: You don’t think?
The tentacle armed with teeth opened its mouth wide, stretching the surrounding meat enough to let its jaws be wide-open. A few even smaller appendages moved out from its mouth, attaching themselves to the tight hole of the womb and tensed.
Fluttershy: (whimpers)
Fallen: Oh god...
Derpy: I don’t even...
twow: You’ve had a foal. This is not going to be pleasant.
Fluttershy's scream echoed out in the room as her precious womb suddenly was ripped open a few inches.
Fluttershy: (screams)
Fallen: Pinkie, I swear to Christ...
Derpy: (winces) Oh my... the pain...
twow: (hugs Derpy)
Like a bag of blood and water, a flood of the two substances gorged the disgusting tentacle as it all poured out from the tight hole on the wooden floor. The mare hollered and struggled, jerking the vines around her fetlocks to understand what happened to her.
Fallen: Because apparently the pain wasn’t nearly enough.
But when she understood it was her womb it opened, a most hideous realization came to her mind.
Derpy: Fallen, if what happens is what I think is going to happen...
Fallen: Depends on whether or not you expect it to end well for the unborn foal.
Fluttershy widened here eyes and forgot the pain for a mere second...
twow: Here are eyes.
Derpy: What?
"No... n... NOOOOOOO!".
Fallen: It helps to imagine Darth Vader delivering the line.
twow: And then imagine him in her position. Burn your eyes? GOOD.
And like it was on queue, the carnivorous appendage plummeted inside the open womb, where the defenseless foal was. It's teeth sunk into the immature flesh, causing the unborn child to twitch before a chunk of its meat ripped of.
Fluttershy: (looking on in abject terror)
Fallen: (hugs Fluttershy) It’s okay, you’re okay.
twow and Derpy: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fluttershy repeated what she screamed. She could hear the noises, all the squishy noises from her moving belly. She could see the small bumps from the tentacle moving around inside her womb as it kept eating her foal.
Fluttershy and Derpy: I CAN’T TAKE THIS ANYMORE!
Fallen: Aw, that’s cute. You think we have a choice.
twow: Damn it Pinkie!
Piece by piece, the sharp teeth ripped off a new piece of flesh and swallowed it down the internal grinder of more teeth. Blood splattered everywhere inside Fluttershy's womb, pieces of meat streamed out, the sound of flesh being ripped apart and crunched filled her ears, and an eternal imagination of the most unforgiving world took shape before her eyes.
Fallen: It looked exactly like G3.5.
twow: Now you’re just TRYING to destroy my even.
The monstrous tentacle shrieked between each bite. Fluttershy could hear it. She heard the monster screaming until it buried its teeth in her child's throat and finally killed it.
Fluttershy: (curled into a ball and crying)
twow: (hugs Fluttershy) This is not good. At all.
Derpy: SOMETHING WILL DIE FOR THIS.
Fallen: I like her attitude.
Its body bumped everywhere, forcing the pony who was supposed to be a mother to see all the tumbles from her belly and all the painful beats it received from the womb. It went for the umbilical cord, tearing it off from the foal without actually damaging it before continuing to dismember and eat its dish of innocent flesh.
Derpy: Worst snack ever. (smacks herself)
Fluttershy could only cry, watch as her most precious treasure was consumed in a bloodbath inside her own stomach. She couldn't protect it, the foal couldn't protect itself. It was a helpless victim as the rests of its body parts fell off only to be devoured in an instant.
Fallen: I can’t believe some twisted fuck actually wrote this. I’d expect this from mrhappyface or Brutalassmaster.
twow: (still holding the crying Fluttershy) Annnnd my heart exploded. Wonderful.
Her scream weren't just because of the otherworldly pain, but also the endless torment in her head when she saw the bitter reality. Her whole world fell into ruins as the indescribable signals raped her mind to no end.
Fallen: Because the tentacles raping her weren’t enough. (smacked by the universe)
Derpy: HIT HIM AGAIN.
twow: Well, you’re scaring the shit out of me.
Soon she couldn't scream anymore, she could just grunt and occasionally groan, twitch a little as a large shock vibrated in her mind. Her ears deafened, she couldn't hear. Her eyes blurred, she couldn't see. Everything lost its meaning now.
Fallen: Food doesn’t taste like anything anymore!
She couldn't see nor hear to understand the reality. But she could smell, she most certainly could smell.
Derpy: Probably smelled like beans. I had too many last night. (smacked by twow)
Smell the blood pouring out from her stuffed marehood...
Fluttershy: (sobbing uncontrollably)
Fallen: Hey, I want to stop. Do you want to stop? I think we should stop.
twow: (shaking in rage) My heart exploded. I-I...
Derpy: Fallen, they aren’t okay. You might wanna stop.
Fluttershy: EEP!
Fallen: Not sure whether I should make a hentai joke or a Cthulhu joke.
twow: Oh dear Luna, NO.
Derpy: You favor Luna, don’t you?
twow: How have you not figured that out? It’s the same way that Fluttershy’s my favorite.
Fallen: And you don’t think saying that repeatedly while Derpy’s sitting right there is gonna make her jealous?
twow: Not when I’ve told her already that she’s my favorite pony that isn’t one of the Elements of Harmony.
Derpy: He said it’s like an equal amount of favorite. It makes sense now!
They all reached out several meters and swayed lightly from left to right to keep their balance. All of them crocked like they had necks and instantly pointed at Fluttershy, revealing their tight orifices at the end of each tentacle.
Fallen: Oh, crap. Those are the tentacles that are supposed to bite your dick off. Twilight got the wrong ones.
All but Fallen: WHAT?!
They had no suction cups, so they couldn't be that of an octopus, sadly enough confusing the defenseless mare even more.
"Wh... wha... what... w-what?"
Fallen: Doing the Doctor proud.
Derpy: He DOES say that a lot. It was funny when I took his screwdriver and blew up the stove.
she exclaimed and almost broke out in tears from the mere sight of the disgusting vine-looking things.
Fallen: And now I’m imagining her getting raped by Venusaur.
Fluttershy: Please stop talking...
Derpy: Dang it! He’s level 45!
twow: Yeah... I taught her how to play that...
Fallen: That’d actually be AWESOME for Fluttershy!
But the appendages didn't pay any attention to her puny voice, instead arched forward as the first one shot at her like a whip. The mare squealed in fear as the wet and agile tentacle wrapped itself around her left hindleg and clenched, summoning a faint signal of pain to Fluttershy's brain.
Fallen: “Come in, HQ. This is Back Left. Transmitting pain, over.”
twow: This is gonna hurt.
Before she could react to what was going on, another of the slithery monsters whipped away to grab her other hindleg, now paralyzing her ability to get away at all.
Fallen: The tentacle porn jokes really make themselves when you’re actually LOOKING at it.
Derpy: Ew.
Fallen: I know.
"No! No! What... what are you doing?" she hollered out as the rivers from her eyes expressed the sorrow, showing her rejection to this so far aggressive behavior.
twow: It’s hugging you. EVERYWHERE.
The slippery tentacles which held onto her hindlegs tensed, attempting to spread her limbs. Her screams intensified when the only possible image in her head started to become reality, thus her very reason for struggling back by floundering her hindlegs.
Fallen: She’s thinking it too.
Fluttershy: I can’t help it...
twow: Go to your happy place.
But no matter how hard she tried, the forelegs couldn't help due to the preciousness in her stomach preventing such actions.
Fallen: The only time anyone should ever rightfully think to themselves “FUCK this baby!”
Derpy: FALLEN!
Fallen: Right on cue.
Instead she could just grunt while helplessly trying to reach her suspended legs.
Without any greater resistance, the two unoccupied tentacles threw themselves towards the two remaining targets in order to completely release the poor mare from all kind of mobility aside from her weak wings.
Fallen: That actually reminds me... they never restrain her wings. I never understood why not.
twow: Because they wouldn’t have been able to do shit anyway.
In the snap of a second, their slippery flesh surrounded the pony's soft fur and certainly more drier
Fallen: Seriously? “More drier?”
Derpy: I know! It should have been, “More dryest!”
skin, locking themselves around her fetlocks like she wore chained cuffs.
In the next moment, Fluttershy realized just how trapped she actually was. Now the slimy limbs could move her just the way they wanted,
Fallen: Skeletal restrictions be damned!
twow: Ouch?
and the first thing on their list was to finally separate her hindlegs from each other, opening wide for her pretty marehood to get exposed right in front of the illuminating pool her violators came from.
Fluttershy: WHAT!?
twow: FUCK. This is going to break me again. It’s worse because Fluttershy’s here also. Last time it was just you all.
The tentacles used more force by pressing down her forelegs mercilessly to the floor, giving her the position as if she already was going to give birth here and now.
Fallen: Now, Fluttershy, when Cthulhu tells you to push- (smacked by Fluttershy) Whoa, WHAT!?
twow: Oh shit. I’m going to not say anything about this now.
The terror was already consuming enough for Fluttershy. Feeling this abandoned and scared at once was really nothing new for her, but this time it came with such an intense wave. For a moment, she thought they were actually going to kill her.
Fallen: That’s later.
Fluttershy: W-what do they do now?
Fallen: It lessens the impact if I try to explain it.
twow: Don’t worry, I can do it. Now Fluttershy... (smacked by Pinkie) WHAT.
Pinkie: (from TV) No spoilers!
Fallen: HOW THE FU-
That was until she opened her teary eyes and accidentally glanced at the magic circle emerging from the floor.
twow: “It was so beautiful..”
Fallen: I’m imagining the monolith from 2001: A Space Odyssey.
Derpy: Love that movie.
Fallen: I KNOW, right?
From the middle of the four already summoned beings, another three identical ones slithered up from the seemingly bottomless vortex, raising up in an arched position to aim a little lower and more precise at the middle.
Fallen: Oh, THESE are the rapey ones.
twow: There’s other kinds?!
Fallen: Don’t feign ignorance. You know what’s coming.
The suspended mare gasped as the additions moved slowly towards her spread thighs, causing her to scream out in her highest pitch when the event turned from bad to nightmarish.
Fallen: Freddy Krueger’s just sitting on the sidelines with popcorn.
twow: That just reminded me of when I read this in the Skype call, and now I want to murder you all over again.
Derpy: twow! That’s not nice!
Fallen: In his defense, neither am I.
Derpy: Then why are you two friends?
Fallen: ...can I get back to you on that?
Derpy: I’m bringing this back up at the next break.
Fallen: Trust me, we’ll have more problems than that by the time we reach that point.
Her lungs almost overexerted themselves until one of the three idle monsters twitched to her ear-cracking noise. Just like that, it jumped over her body, aiming straight into the wide-open hole causing that annoying noise.
Fluttershy: Why is this happening!?
twow: Because of the bloody reason.
"AAAHhglmph...!" her voice choked instantly with the fat and sticky appendage stuffing her mouth full of alien flesh, going all the way down her throat for just a second before sliding up again. Fluttershy coughed from the violent attack, stunned long enough for the two other tentacles to peacefully reach her nether lips.
Fallen: I’m kind of disgusted that they’d use the word “peacefully.”
twow: That word shouldn’t even exist in this story.
The innocent eyes kept crying, especially when they opened wide in pain and furthered denial. As her labia split up, so did her sphincter from the intruders. Their already slippery skin proved to have no problems breaking through the tight openings, easily sliding inside each warm hole to explore her inner flesh while causing her pain and agony.
Fluttershy: This is worse than “Rarity’s Generous Plan!”
Fallen: You’re completely right, but you’re also saying it too early.
Derpy: This gets WORSE?!
Fallen: Like you wouldn’t believe.
The pony couldn't fight back. All her ability was to lie there, completely suspended while her mouth, marehood and anal
Fallen: I don’t think you’re using that word right.
were unwillingly penetrated, choking her with disgusting meat and violating her sacred grounds.
twow and Derpy: WHAT?!
Fallen: I know! Who rapes a church?
All but Fallen: FALLEN!
Fluttershy felt shame when the extremely vague pulses of pleasure moved inside her senses. These tentacles were at least as big as her stallion, if not even larger.
Fluttershy: (whimpering)
twow: It’s okay Fluttershy, it can’t touch you.
Fallen: Well, unless I had a printed copy of the story...
twow: I WILL DESTROY EVERYTHING YOU LOVE.
Sadly, she didn't like how fast the other one in her rectum moved.
Once it dug deeper to enlarge the rest of her warm anal, a shriek of ache bucked her mind to no end.
Fallen: Great, her EARS too?
Derpy: I don’t think that’s possible, I hope.
Fallen: That’s exactly what Jimmy kept screaming when he got beaten to death with his own skull...
twow: ...What.
She twisted and jerked her head all ways possible, searching for any way to break loose from this scene of rape. But the constricting tentacles just tensed further to keep her in place while the others kept working.
Fallen: This is the bane of any visual reader’s existence.
twow: So this is why I’m dying inside.
The one inside her stuffed pink slit moved further inside, pushing aside all blocking flesh to reach even deeper inside.
Fallen: Are you sure you said “inside” enough times?
twow: I guess the author wanted us to have all of the inside information. (slapped by everyone)
Being the very pony who this abomination was inside,
Fallen: Huh. Guess not.
Fluttershy grit her teeth for each inch it slithered and moved around in her inner walls.
Fallen: Biting off the one in her mouth in the process.
Fluttershy: EW!
Derpy: It’s gotta be better than having it rape your mouth!
The one inside her behind didn't got much deeper than a few inches before it started moving around carefully, like it waited for the tight rectum to get used to its large size. But the so far most disgusting part was without doubt the tentacle in her mouth, jerking and waving back and forth in her mouth like she was giving it a serious blowjob without her actually doing anything at all but receiving.
Fallen: And that’s just LAZY.
All but Fallen: FALLEN!
Fallen: Can you blame me for fighting fire with fire?
twow: I think we all can.
She almost put a little focus on what it tasted like, but it was completely unidentified. Was this how magic tasted?
Fallen: Like octopus and semen?
Fluttershy: (resisting urge to vomit)
Derpy: (smacks Fallen)
The pegasus suddenly gasped and relaxed her filled mouth. The long appendage in her female cavern
Fallen: I feel like I need a euphemism thesaurus. These are getting weird.
had reached its end, the opening to the womb.
Derpy: Without going into details, this isn’t how my first time went.
twow: You mean, with the Doctor? (smacked by Derpy) Hey! That was just a question!
Derpy: That I didn’t like.
At that moment, the tentacle in her mouth stopped moving too, simply remaining in her mouth all still. Fluttershy's muffled whimpering and slight grunts didn't get anywhere in the air when a large dosage of excruciating fear woke up.
Fallen: The fear then rushed out the door. It was gonna get fired if it was late again!
twow: Musta had the same alarm clock Coal had.
That disgusting thing was just a few inches away from her foal. Her eyes moved ever so slowly down to her belly, begging to Celestia nothing would happen now.
Fallen: Those prayers obviously fell on deaf ears.
twow: Duh. She SHOULD have prayed to Luna. It was at night, after all.
The tentacle had stopped moving after bumping into her very small and tight opening, remaining still for several seconds to further the poor mare's moment of absolute fear. There was no way it could get inside, however.
Fallen: Someone put a womb in its way.
twow: I almost stabbed you with one of your own sawblades.
Derpy: (holding sawblade) I can do it!
twow: Derpy! Put that down!
After the short moment of stillness and silence, the sticky appendage ripped out from her inside in an instant, rippling out a quick shot of pain in Fluttershy's brain as she threw her head back with a groan. The tentacle slipped back in the dark blue pool of magic substance, disappearing as its role apparently was over.
Fallen: “Alright, Fred, that was your character’s only scene. Collect your paycheck on the way out.”
Fluttershy panted, relieved that it finally was out of her inner.
Fallen: Who uses ADJECTIVES as nouns? Verbs are where it’s at.
Derpy: VERB! That’s what’s happening!
twow: It sucks that Fluttershy’s unable to flutter out of this situation. (slapped by Fluttershy) Okay, I deserved that one.
She could still feel the very uncomfortable intruder in her rectum, but that sort of pain was excluded and ignored when her concern for the baby suddenly took up all place. And the one in her mouth was actually not so disturbing anymore. It was like it didn't exist there for a moment.
Fallen: Must be an acquired taste. (slapped by Fluttershy) Oh, COME ON!
twow: She’s slapping everyone today. Fluttershy has her own dark side.
Her tired head and body had already reached their limits in what they could take, but she still felt this wasn't really over yet. Did those things came her
Fallen: I’m starting to doubt English was his first language.
Derpy: Maybe his first language was Griffon?
just to dig inside her orifices and then leave? Then why were the other ones still here holding all four of her legs?
She was just a second from finding out...
Fluttershy: ...did someone time it?
Fallen: Oh god. This is where it starts to get fucked up.
twow: Pinkie will pay for this. In blood.
Fallen: She’ll bleed for us both.
Derpy: twow? Fallen? Relax.
Her ears picked up a sound coming from the dark blue glimmering pool, so she looked up from the floor again to see her swollen stomach blocking the sight of the creepy hole in the floor. As she watched, a new appendage with the same thickness and agile movement appeared.
Fallen: Yeah. Most of the time, tentacles on one creature are the same length as all the others.
twow: Let’s NOT question tentacle logic.
Only this one had already differed itself from the others by making slight screeching noises. Fluttershy felt shivers up her spine as the awful noises sounding like a strangled animal aimed at her.
Fallen: The strangled noises missed their mark, however, and crashed into a nearby tree.
twow: I wish.
It was then she saw the absolutely biggest difference. Instead of just a small orifice dripping an unknown fluid, two sets of razor sharp teeth decorated the face of this tentacle, opening its mouth wide to reveal the other sets deeper inside its long, damp body. All of the upper rows dripped what seemed to be some sort of saliva, pouring out from the mouth to the floor.
Derpy: Remember what I said about relaxing? Forget that.
Fallen: Hello, Attack of the Giant Leeches flashbacks.
In the background of its own horrifying screech, Fluttershy hollered out from the top of her lungs when this ultimate form of monstrosity from her imagination
Fallen: ...so it’s a dream? If so, where the FUCK is Luna!?
twow: Obviously NOT doing her damn job.
plunged towards her fragile sex.
All: NO!
It was more brutal and merciless than the previous one, mauling past her sensitive flesh. The screams from her mouth weren't heard, but her teeth chewed on the medium soft flesh in her mouth. The tentacle slipped out from her mouth, flinging itself around to escape the pain, giving the orifice it was supposed to silence an opportunity to scream out in pain.
Fluttershy: (yelps)
Fallen: How long’s it been since she was able to form words?
twow: Way too long.
"Aaahhhh! No! Aaahhhh, please stoooop!" her desperate and high-pitched voice yelled, fully ignored by the new intruder in her marehood. She kept roaring, it kept going further.
Fallen: With this guy’s description of depth, it’s hard not to imagine her vagina as a bag of infinite holding.
Derpy: How do the girls stand you sometimes?
Fallen: I wasn’t aware that they did.
twow: THAT’S not a surprise.
Finally it hit her womb, bumping with a slam into the insignificant opening. Fluttershy grimaced from the utter ache that brought, one again silenced as she looked down at the remaining body outside of her female sex.
Fallen: She didn’t like the way it was staring at her.
twow: You don’t think?
The tentacle armed with teeth opened its mouth wide, stretching the surrounding meat enough to let its jaws be wide-open. A few even smaller appendages moved out from its mouth, attaching themselves to the tight hole of the womb and tensed.
Fluttershy: (whimpers)
Fallen: Oh god...
Derpy: I don’t even...
twow: You’ve had a foal. This is not going to be pleasant.
Fluttershy's scream echoed out in the room as her precious womb suddenly was ripped open a few inches.
Fluttershy: (screams)
Fallen: Pinkie, I swear to Christ...
Derpy: (winces) Oh my... the pain...
twow: (hugs Derpy)
Like a bag of blood and water, a flood of the two substances gorged the disgusting tentacle as it all poured out from the tight hole on the wooden floor. The mare hollered and struggled, jerking the vines around her fetlocks to understand what happened to her.
Fallen: Because apparently the pain wasn’t nearly enough.
But when she understood it was her womb it opened, a most hideous realization came to her mind.
Derpy: Fallen, if what happens is what I think is going to happen...
Fallen: Depends on whether or not you expect it to end well for the unborn foal.
Fluttershy widened here eyes and forgot the pain for a mere second...
twow: Here are eyes.
Derpy: What?
"No... n... NOOOOOOO!".
Fallen: It helps to imagine Darth Vader delivering the line.
twow: And then imagine him in her position. Burn your eyes? GOOD.
And like it was on queue, the carnivorous appendage plummeted inside the open womb, where the defenseless foal was. It's teeth sunk into the immature flesh, causing the unborn child to twitch before a chunk of its meat ripped of.
Fluttershy: (looking on in abject terror)
Fallen: (hugs Fluttershy) It’s okay, you’re okay.
twow and Derpy: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fluttershy repeated what she screamed. She could hear the noises, all the squishy noises from her moving belly. She could see the small bumps from the tentacle moving around inside her womb as it kept eating her foal.
Fluttershy and Derpy: I CAN’T TAKE THIS ANYMORE!
Fallen: Aw, that’s cute. You think we have a choice.
twow: Damn it Pinkie!
Piece by piece, the sharp teeth ripped off a new piece of flesh and swallowed it down the internal grinder of more teeth. Blood splattered everywhere inside Fluttershy's womb, pieces of meat streamed out, the sound of flesh being ripped apart and crunched filled her ears, and an eternal imagination of the most unforgiving world took shape before her eyes.
Fallen: It looked exactly like G3.5.
twow: Now you’re just TRYING to destroy my even.
The monstrous tentacle shrieked between each bite. Fluttershy could hear it. She heard the monster screaming until it buried its teeth in her child's throat and finally killed it.
Fluttershy: (curled into a ball and crying)
twow: (hugs Fluttershy) This is not good. At all.
Derpy: SOMETHING WILL DIE FOR THIS.
Fallen: I like her attitude.
Its body bumped everywhere, forcing the pony who was supposed to be a mother to see all the tumbles from her belly and all the painful beats it received from the womb. It went for the umbilical cord, tearing it off from the foal without actually damaging it before continuing to dismember and eat its dish of innocent flesh.
Derpy: Worst snack ever. (smacks herself)
Fluttershy could only cry, watch as her most precious treasure was consumed in a bloodbath inside her own stomach. She couldn't protect it, the foal couldn't protect itself. It was a helpless victim as the rests of its body parts fell off only to be devoured in an instant.
Fallen: I can’t believe some twisted fuck actually wrote this. I’d expect this from mrhappyface or Brutalassmaster.
twow: (still holding the crying Fluttershy) Annnnd my heart exploded. Wonderful.
Her scream weren't just because of the otherworldly pain, but also the endless torment in her head when she saw the bitter reality. Her whole world fell into ruins as the indescribable signals raped her mind to no end.
Fallen: Because the tentacles raping her weren’t enough. (smacked by the universe)
Derpy: HIT HIM AGAIN.
twow: Well, you’re scaring the shit out of me.
Soon she couldn't scream anymore, she could just grunt and occasionally groan, twitch a little as a large shock vibrated in her mind. Her ears deafened, she couldn't hear. Her eyes blurred, she couldn't see. Everything lost its meaning now.
Fallen: Food doesn’t taste like anything anymore!
She couldn't see nor hear to understand the reality. But she could smell, she most certainly could smell.
Derpy: Probably smelled like beans. I had too many last night. (smacked by twow)
Smell the blood pouring out from her stuffed marehood...
Fluttershy: (sobbing uncontrollably)
Fallen: Hey, I want to stop. Do you want to stop? I think we should stop.
twow: (shaking in rage) My heart exploded. I-I...
Derpy: Fallen, they aren’t okay. You might wanna stop.
Fallen: Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell... you guys are holding up nicely.
Fluttershy: (glancing longingly at every gun on every shelf)
twow: GET PINKIE ON THE SCREEN. NOW.
Derpy: I have some words for her as well.
Dash: (from TV) Heh. Uh... would you believe she stepped out for a little while? Said there was somepony she needed to get.
twow: She doesn’t want to live long, does she?
Derpy: Who did she leave to get?
Dash: She didn’t tell me! I asked, but she just kept saying it was “somepony.”
Fallen: Whoever it is, I’m starting to think they’ll need to talk Fluttershy out of- PUT THAT KATANA DOWN, FLUTTERSHY!
twow: (takes katana from Fluttershy) Yeah, no. I don’t think the princesses would like if if you killed yourself.
(Suddenly, a slam is heard from the other side of the TV.)
Pinkie: (offscreen) Did you stall them long enough, Dashie?
Dash: Yeah, they’re fine. Good thing you came when you did, too, since Fluttershy’s really not doing too good.
twow: YOU DON’T FUCKING SAY?!
Fluttershy: I don’t want to know this exists...
Derpy: Pinkie, what is wrong with you?! Why did you put Fluttershy though this? And where did you go?!
Pinkie: (from TV) Hi, Derpy! Sorry, I just needed to get somepony to come over and talk to you guys. It took some convincing, but he should be here any second now!
Fallen: “He?”
twow: Who the hell is it?
(A series of crashes is heard offscreen.)
???: Sorry! I wish I could fix that for you, but this blasted thing doesn’t have a setting for wood.
twow: You didn’t...
Fallen: Holy shit, I think she did.
Derpy: (gasps) I might have just slightly forgiven her.
(The Doctor himself steps into frame, still hopelessly working his sonic screwdriver.)
Doctor: (from TV) Tch. One of these days I’ll add that setting... oh! Derpy!
Derpy: Doctor!
Doctor: Where are you? What are you doing? And... who is HE?
Fallen: Oh, me? I’m the guy who owns the place. And it’s Pinkie’s fault that she’s here.
twow: Hey there Doctor. Before Derpy gives you the rundown, how you been?
Doctor: Oh, can’t complain. Well, I suppose I could, but it’s nothing you’d want to hear. ...well, maybe there are a FEW good bits in there.
Derpy: Pinkie locked us in here to read a story where Fluttershy’s pregnant, gets raped by tentacles and then they eat her unborn child. Fluttershy and twow already broke and I want to kill something.
Fluttershy: I just want to curl up and die...
Fallen: Doesn’t look good, Doc.
Doctor: ...I assume you’ve been chatting with Derpy and twow about me. Either way, I’d rather you didn’t call me that.
Fallen: Sorry.
twow: Why the hell did Pinkie bring you here anyway?
Doctor: I’m not entirely certain, I’m afraid. She barged into the house, started talking at a mile a minute - and I swear, that mare puts me to shame! - and the only things I really made out were “Derpy,” “story,” and “moral support.”
twow: Glad you came. Derpy almost killed something. Well, if she had been let out, something would have died. Out with it Pinkie!
Pinkie: ...alright, I’m sorry. I really shouldn’t have shown this to you, and I REALLY really shouldn’t have shown it to Derpy, and I really REALLY really shouldn’t have shown it to Fluttershy.
twow: You kinda did pick the worst two mares to show it to.
Pinkie: I know, and I’m so super sorry! That’s why I wanted to try and make it up to you by bringing somepony I knew you guys all liked a lot! Even if he’s not technically a pony.
Doctor: What!? But how did you-
Pinkie: The Internet.
Doctor: WHAT!?
twow: I’m just wondering how and why you procreated with Derpy.
Doctor: Oh. Well... it’s... it’s a long and awkward story. Believe me, Derpy would be better at telling it. I’m a bit surprised she hasn’t already. You two are rather close.
Derpy: We are, it’s just that I didn’t know if YOU wanted him to know.
Doctor: He knows this much about us, and I trust him just as much as you do. Couldn’t hurt.
Fallen: I feel like SUCH a third wheel here.
Fluttershy: I’m just glad we’re not reading...
Fallen: The worst is over.
twow: Now you’re just lying to her. Oh and Doctor? Thanks. This’ll really help Derpy.
Doctor: Glad I could be of service!
Derpy: Are you ready, Fluttershy? We’re almost done, I think.
Fluttershy: I’ll never be ready...
Fallen: This is the first and only time I’ll ever say this to you, but grow a pair.
twow: I’m just not gonna comment on that.
(Buzzer sounds.)
All: We’ve got story sign!
Fluttershy: (glancing longingly at every gun on every shelf)
twow: GET PINKIE ON THE SCREEN. NOW.
Derpy: I have some words for her as well.
Dash: (from TV) Heh. Uh... would you believe she stepped out for a little while? Said there was somepony she needed to get.
twow: She doesn’t want to live long, does she?
Derpy: Who did she leave to get?
Dash: She didn’t tell me! I asked, but she just kept saying it was “somepony.”
Fallen: Whoever it is, I’m starting to think they’ll need to talk Fluttershy out of- PUT THAT KATANA DOWN, FLUTTERSHY!
twow: (takes katana from Fluttershy) Yeah, no. I don’t think the princesses would like if if you killed yourself.
(Suddenly, a slam is heard from the other side of the TV.)
Pinkie: (offscreen) Did you stall them long enough, Dashie?
Dash: Yeah, they’re fine. Good thing you came when you did, too, since Fluttershy’s really not doing too good.
twow: YOU DON’T FUCKING SAY?!
Fluttershy: I don’t want to know this exists...
Derpy: Pinkie, what is wrong with you?! Why did you put Fluttershy though this? And where did you go?!
Pinkie: (from TV) Hi, Derpy! Sorry, I just needed to get somepony to come over and talk to you guys. It took some convincing, but he should be here any second now!
Fallen: “He?”
twow: Who the hell is it?
(A series of crashes is heard offscreen.)
???: Sorry! I wish I could fix that for you, but this blasted thing doesn’t have a setting for wood.
twow: You didn’t...
Fallen: Holy shit, I think she did.
Derpy: (gasps) I might have just slightly forgiven her.
(The Doctor himself steps into frame, still hopelessly working his sonic screwdriver.)
Doctor: (from TV) Tch. One of these days I’ll add that setting... oh! Derpy!
Derpy: Doctor!
Doctor: Where are you? What are you doing? And... who is HE?
Fallen: Oh, me? I’m the guy who owns the place. And it’s Pinkie’s fault that she’s here.
twow: Hey there Doctor. Before Derpy gives you the rundown, how you been?
Doctor: Oh, can’t complain. Well, I suppose I could, but it’s nothing you’d want to hear. ...well, maybe there are a FEW good bits in there.
Derpy: Pinkie locked us in here to read a story where Fluttershy’s pregnant, gets raped by tentacles and then they eat her unborn child. Fluttershy and twow already broke and I want to kill something.
Fluttershy: I just want to curl up and die...
Fallen: Doesn’t look good, Doc.
Doctor: ...I assume you’ve been chatting with Derpy and twow about me. Either way, I’d rather you didn’t call me that.
Fallen: Sorry.
twow: Why the hell did Pinkie bring you here anyway?
Doctor: I’m not entirely certain, I’m afraid. She barged into the house, started talking at a mile a minute - and I swear, that mare puts me to shame! - and the only things I really made out were “Derpy,” “story,” and “moral support.”
twow: Glad you came. Derpy almost killed something. Well, if she had been let out, something would have died. Out with it Pinkie!
Pinkie: ...alright, I’m sorry. I really shouldn’t have shown this to you, and I REALLY really shouldn’t have shown it to Derpy, and I really REALLY really shouldn’t have shown it to Fluttershy.
twow: You kinda did pick the worst two mares to show it to.
Pinkie: I know, and I’m so super sorry! That’s why I wanted to try and make it up to you by bringing somepony I knew you guys all liked a lot! Even if he’s not technically a pony.
Doctor: What!? But how did you-
Pinkie: The Internet.
Doctor: WHAT!?
twow: I’m just wondering how and why you procreated with Derpy.
Doctor: Oh. Well... it’s... it’s a long and awkward story. Believe me, Derpy would be better at telling it. I’m a bit surprised she hasn’t already. You two are rather close.
Derpy: We are, it’s just that I didn’t know if YOU wanted him to know.
Doctor: He knows this much about us, and I trust him just as much as you do. Couldn’t hurt.
Fallen: I feel like SUCH a third wheel here.
Fluttershy: I’m just glad we’re not reading...
Fallen: The worst is over.
twow: Now you’re just lying to her. Oh and Doctor? Thanks. This’ll really help Derpy.
Doctor: Glad I could be of service!
Derpy: Are you ready, Fluttershy? We’re almost done, I think.
Fluttershy: I’ll never be ready...
Fallen: This is the first and only time I’ll ever say this to you, but grow a pair.
twow: I’m just not gonna comment on that.
(Buzzer sounds.)
All: We’ve got story sign!
Her tears poured down as her tired vocal cord hardly could agree to the mere grunting. Her thoughts surrounded Big Macintosh. Why wasn't he here? What would he say? How would she explain this? Could she even live with this?
twow: The question is, are you going to live at all?
Fluttershy: (trying to aim a revolver at her temple)
Fallen: (grabs revolver) Dammit, twow, we JUST fixed her!
twow: I meant the story you, Fluttershy! You have to live!
Fluttershy: (sobbing and hugging Fallen)
Fallen: Home stretch. Come on, you’re strong, you can do this.
twow: Geez, I’m not good with mares. (slapped by Derpy)
Derpy: Apologize.
twow: (shudders) I’m really sorry, Fluttershy.
Before she could answer her own question, the carnivore inside her womb was done. The last piece of blood-drenched meat was crushed between its teeth, allowing it to slip out from the wide-open and empty womb only to slide through the bloodied inner walls and out past her labia. A whip of blood splattered out on the walls.
Fallen: ...how bad is it that all that comes to mind are graphic menstruation jokes? (slapped by Fluttershy and Derpy)
twow: Makes me wonder why I didn’t get hit when I had that thought of... never mind.
Fluttershy had her head laying down on the hard floor again. Her tears and sobbing coughs attracted the tentacle, thus the reason why it extended over her body to look down on her muzzle of sorrow.
Fallen: She must have been at the Pit of Despair’s gift shop. Right next door to the Gorge of Eternal Peril.
twow: Pit of Despair’s gift shop has some nice umbrellas.
The poor mare didn't have to turn her eyes to see it. She saw the monster covered in blood, how it swayed lightly to keep its balance while aiming at her from a meter's distance.
Fallen: Sounds like it’s hypnotizing her.
The mouth filled with razor sharp teeth opened wide, spilling out a thick waterfall of blood it swallowed during the ordeal over Fluttershy's face.
twow: Guess he hasn’t learned the art of swallowing. (bitch-smacked by Derpy) That’s a new one.
Derpy: WATCH IT.
She couldn't keep her mouth closed. She knew who's blood this was, and the shock itself was so strong she couldn't hold herself. About a gallon of the scarlet fluid filled her mouth, and not until she felt the taste of her own foal's blood,
Fluttershy: (clinging tightly to Fallen)
Derpy: (squeezes twow’s arm)
twow: I hate this story.
Fallen: We all do.
she became aware of the strong jerks in her stomach. She threw her head to the side and vomited up the blood with her latest meal, digested and warm. A puddle of brown, red and what-not escaped.
Derpy: I’m afraid to know what the “what-not” is.
Fallen: Allegedly, it’s a color.
twow: I never saw that in my crayon box.
The blood stopped raining down on her, finally done soaking her mane and face. Now she was ruined on the outside as well as on the inside... in all possible interpretations about the mind and body.
Fallen: Oh, don’t try to make the rape symbolic.
twow: OR CUTE.
The yellow mare coughed up the rest, forming more of the large puddle she laid in while the dark green tentacle retreated back to the dark blue pool.
Fluttershy: Thank you...
Derpy: I have a feeling it’s not over yet.
Fallen: Oh, not at all.
Fluttershy couldn't think anymore with the moment hovering over her memories. Only a partial wish for death passed by every now and then. But what pushed aside this idea was the large stallion still in her dreams.
Fallen: In her heart of hearts, she longed for King Sombra.
twow: That’s an interesting want.
She knew there would be at last some sort of comfort, that's why she only tried to think of him and not the gruesome and mortifying fact that her stomach was a little smaller now.
Fallen: Best. Weight loss. EVER.
Fluttershy: Fuck you.
twow: ...Damn.
But it wasn't over just yet. As she almost passed out, the tentacle hanging above her head aimed for its old target again, plunging inside the mouth of its victim. Fluttershy didn't care.
Fallen: She does what she wants!
It could do whatever it wanted to her now, not that she gave a flying feather about it. However, as something new popped up from the circle and pool of magic, she wondered if it was death approaching.
Fallen: You’d like that, wouldn’t you?
Fluttershy: So much...
Derpy: You aren’t allowed to die on me!
It was another tentacle, unique to the others and also its previous friend. This one was a bit fatter and had a much larger orifice on its tip.
Fallen: I guess it wasn’t content with eating the fetus. Now it lusts for the mother’s blood.
twow: Considering that this Fluttershy wants death, then it won’t be a big issue.
It's stickiness and slippery body was just like the others, however. Without any time to waste, it went it the same way like the previous one, only it was much more blood and mangled inner flesh now.
Fallen: And fuck you for thinking the rape train had any brakes.
twow: Damn thing has rockets on the back.
The mare let out a weak moan as her hole was penetrated again, leaving the rest to be as its new visitor had another goal in mind without her knowledge.
Fallen: This is from Fluttershy’s point of view. She shouldn’t know the tentacle had a hidden agenda.
Derpy: Can I call POV change?
Fallen: Do you have its number?
Derpy: Yep! It’s 1-800-867-5309.
The intruding appendage reached the massacred womb, discovering its purpose now could be fulfilled inside this warm and bloody inner. The orifice of this tentacle expanded and widened out to form a suction cup, and as soon as it was of enough size it attached itself to the enlarged hole of the womb.
Fluttershy: Where is this going...?
Fallen: Avoiding the obvious literal answer, you’re about to find out.
twow: (nervously looks around) I’ll tell you. Now.. (soniced by the Doctor) I DON’T EVEN.
Derpy: Doctor!
Fallen: WHO KEEPS-
Fluttershy shivered, wondering why they kept doing this to her. Finally she could also ask herself why Twilight would do this.
Fluttershy: I don’t know if I can face her after this...
Was this intentional? No, it had to be some mistake. A horrible, HORRIBLE mistake. And no, she couldn't even imagine to reach the consideration of forgiveness or intolerance to it. She was just completely destroyed, not sure if she wanted to live or die anymore.
Fluttershy: Death sounds nice...
twow: You aren’t allowed to die yet. (hugs Fluttershy)
Meanwhile, the tentacle currently residing in the other hole of Fluttershy started moving. It had been inside her rectum during the feast, moving occasionally every now and then without getting noticed due to the other event's gruesome nature.
Fallen: How fucked up must your life be if getting raped up the ass by a tentacle is the LEAST of your concerns?
twow: Read what just happened and ask that again.
But now it was time for it to serve a purpose too by moving deeper. It slithered deeper up her anal, moving past the more and more filthy parts... and pressed even further.
Derpy: Really?! Why can’t it leave her alone!
Even if her spirit was pretty much gone, Fluttershy simply couldn't ignore the intense ache as the tentacle broke in through the part of her bowl
Fallen: Dammit. Now what’ll she eat cereal out of?
twow: Your skull after I scoop your brain out of it.
Fallen: You mean Pinkie’s skull, right?
twow: No. Hers I’m turning into my water bottle.
Derpy: TWOW!
that wasn't her rectum anymore. Her sore and exhausted lungs found energy to squeal, followed by a dying grunt as soon as the appendage in her mouth reacted to the puny voice.
Fallen: Aw, she’s serenading it to sleep!
All but Fallen: NO!
And without any warning, it shot down her throat, going several inches down until it expanded her neck due to its size. The tortured mare widened her eyes as another tear among those many others broke out. She couldn't breath.
Fallen: She can breathe as well as I can even.
twow: I’m surprised that we’re not dead yet.
But the tentacle had a reason for this behavior. As soon as it had traveled far enough, fluids started pumping from its roots in the dark blue circle. The other tentacle deep up her anal did the same, in the end spraying out the goo traveling through it.
Fallen: Oh god, she got it excited. (slapped by Fluttershy) STOP THAT!
Derpy: Cut it out Fallen!
twow: I guess that you could say that it was... spraying. YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA- (slapped by Fallen’s bullet) Da fuq?!
Suddenly, Fluttershy couldn't feel anything where the slithery intruders traveled. Her guts slowly succumbed into numbness as the tranquilizing liquid poured from each vine-looking orifice. And when that temporary problem was solved, the tentacle inside her bowls
Fallen: Hentai-O’s! Part of this balanced breakfast!
twow: Serve with blood, semen and chunks of foal. (shot by Fluttershy)
Fallen: How did you get your gun back!?
kept digging further as the one in her mouth left her throat once again in peace. She could breath again, but not without receiving a stain of the sticky substance spraying over her bloodied face without an effect.
Fallen: ...I can’t think of a good bukakke joke. Someone help? (smacked by Derpy) Why are YOU hitting me!?
Derpy: I smacked twow for making fun of that. Don’t think I won’t do the same to you.
Somehow, the thing going unnaturally deep inside her behind managed to shift in size, shrinking to get smaller as it entered the tighter and more narrow guts. Apparently it was an ability coming from its magical origin.
Fallen: It’s magic. Cthulhu don’t gotta explain SHIT.
Derpy: It’d be nice though.
With Fluttershy not being able to feel anything on the inside, the disgusting being inside her marehood started pumping too.
However, since it was connected to her womb, it had a far more important thing to pump than a mere tranquilizing liquid.
Fluttershy: (whimpering)
Fallen: Oh, hey! Beyond the repeated smacking, I almost forgot you were here!
twow: That’s because she hasn’t been able to use words from the last break!
As the first bloated mass went from the pool up in the long body, squeezing past Fluttershy's bloody and massacred sex, it ended up in the enlarged womb. She could still feel inside that part of her body, and it was something round and rather hard.
Fallen: You know, tentacle demons aren’t the only creatures that lay eggs in the corpses of their victims. Y’all have seen Alien, right?
twow: I have NOT shown Derpy that...yet.
Fallen: Really? Twilight and Rarity LOVED the sequel.
twow: Derpy. Get ready to see a movie later.
Just a short blink of an eye later, another pump with the same size traveled through the tentacle inside her body, and another, and another...
Fallen: Damn. I can’t even imagine what kind of mess it’d make if she made it cum outside. (decked in the balls by Fluttershy)
twow: Fluttershy? You alright there?
Fluttershy: NO!!!
Load after load while the other monster dug past the remaining bowls, eggs of an alien kind stacked up in a pile inside the violated womb, tumbling around until the lack of space forced them together in a narrow formation. Fluttershy felt the load building up inside her, and she didn't want to know what in Equestria these things filled her up with.
Fallen: Well, maybe they’re in Equestria NOW, but they’re not OF Equestria.
Derpy: I’m sure that the Doctor would have taken care of these if he found them.
Fallen: Yeah, he’s kind of a badass.
twow: You have no idea...
But whatever it was, it had to be something bad after all the nightmarish things they had done to her. But no matter what they had planned, she was still doomed to just lie down and watch as it continued.
twow: Not like she really had a choice.
First eating her unborn foal and then filling her up with their own offspring. This kind and naïve mare didn't know these horrifying things even could happen.
Fallen: Actual animals lay their eggs in their victims’ corpses. Even if they don’t eject the previous fetus, that part of it isn’t new to you.
Derpy: It sure isn’t news to me.
Was this real? Was she dreaming? Yes, this had to be a dream, because such an abomination like this couldn't exist. But no, it hurt... and you don't feel pain in dreams.
Fallen: Plus, no Luna to bail her out.
twow: I’m going to write a VERY angry letter to Celestia.
Dream or not, the tentacle kept impregnating her with more eggs until the last one went inside and she was full.
Fallen: Well... at least it’s putting something back.
Derpy: It can’t replace what was taken!
Once the last egg was pumped inside her womb, the suction cup around this appendage sprayed something else than eggs. Now it was a fluid almost like the tranquilizing kind, only this one didn't make her feel numb at all.
Fallen: And THERE’S the happy ending.
twow: This isn’t going to end well, and you know it.
Fallen: Yeah... THAT’S what I meant.
Derpy: You have a backwards way of saying things.
The question mark was about to form up in the mare's head, but the time for that wasn't enough. Suddenly, she felt a retching in stomach, a very violent one too. And now she couldn't feel anything there either...
Fallen: So how did she know about the retching she couldn’t feel?
twow: Also, why hasn’t she thrown up before this?
She jerked her head several times, unable to get away from this progressing sickness occupying her mind to the brim with malevolence. In the end, she closed her mouth as a load of vomit traveled up her throat again. But then, she was forced to open it again and finally let the filth out.
Along with the thing that caused all of this.
Fallen: ...she puked up Twilight?
Derpy: What.
In an eruption of disgusting puke shooting up like a fountain in the air, the tentacle which had traveled all the way from Fluttershy's anal through her bowls had finally emerged from her mouth.
Fallen: All the way. All the way. ALL THE WAY THROUGH. ALL THE WAY.
All but Fallen: HAAAAAAATE!
The pegasus couldn't scream or even know what to do other than just stare at this horror. The slimy and filthy monster waved and kept shooting its warm liquid all over the floor, soon stopping when it realized it was outside again.
Fallen: “Oh, shit, sorry, I didn’t want that getting on your floor. That would’ve been SO rude.”
twow: “Allow me to continue to empty myself inside your body.”
But now the thin body of this extremely long tentacle was all inside Fluttershy, filling every bowl connected to her food digestion. And thanks to its numbing poison, she couldn't feel a thing
Derpy: So now she’s numb. At least she won’t feel more pain.
She stared, unable to breathe again and fully assured she didn't want to remember this. Even if this was a dream, she wouldn't stand living with it.
Fluttershy: I know the feeling...
twow: If this had been a dream, I would have shot Luna for not waking you up!
The sight of this struggling thing currently forcing out her tongue while thrusting from her sphincter, together with the fact that her stomach was bloated and round again, had made all this into a scene that convinced her to see one and only ending to this. She was going to die.
Fallen: Where the fuck did you THINK this was going?
Derpy: Her living?
Fallen: That’d be the worst thing ever.
In the heat of the waiting moment, the eggs inside Fluttershy's womb bathed in the fluids the planting tentacle showered them in.
Fallen: I hope they’re being cooked to eat. At this point, I don’t want these things to be things that exist.
twow: That goes for both of us.
It was a small quantity which had increased and got stuck to all the hard shells like glue. The sticky substance worked with nutrients, processing what was going to be the very fulfilled meaning and purpose of these otherworldly creatures.
Fallen: Did you only JUST figure it out!?
twow: Did that happen inside of her? Because then she wouldn’t have known yet.
Fallen: Her womb’s the only thing that WASN’T numbed.
The eggs found what they needed from the helpful fluids, soon enlarging as they all grew in size, maturing to hatch from where they were. All they needed was a warm and fertile ground, and now nothing could stop the ultimate goal for these hard containers of life.
Fallen: It’s called an abortion.
twow: One of the few times I would advise having one.
Fallen: I meant the story itself, but that too.
Fluttershy's lungs were blocked from all oxygen, her world was dying again. From the blur she could only see her swollen belly vibrating and moving, the eggs hatched. It was tight and warm, loose and cold, just about enough and way too much.
Fallen: Pick something and stick with it.
Her eyes rolled back as the last tear she could muster fell from her tear canal. The world faded more and more, reality grasped her soul and embraced her in a hollow hug, telling her it was alright.
Derpy: Just let her die already!
If she could, her lips would have smile.
Fluttershy: (sob)
Derpy: (hugs Fluttershy)
In an explosion, all walls in the cottage were stained and repainted in a second with thick and scarlet fluids. The ceiling and floor had several bits of squishy substance stuck to each surface alongside the blood. Like a maddened painter creating a piece of angered art, the room was redecorated in a grim aura from the warm blood dripping down the walls.
Fallen: That’s exactly what you wanted, Derpy. Happy?
Derpy: NOT LIKE THAT!
twow: Derpy’s broken. And I already KNOW that Fluttershy is.
The sparkle in the once timid and kind pony's eyes disappeared, leaving behind her defiled and lifeless corpse in a pitiful scene of breeding. But what had hatched from this body had no respect for its grounds, instantly looking around in their newly gained shape and bodies to see their first source of meal.
Fluttershy: (desperately trying to unsheath a scimitar)
Fallen: Goddammit, why are you acting like this!?
twow: (takes scimitar) Why do you THINK?
Fallen: No, I know, but she’s never been like this! Not even through the worst pieces of shit on the face of the Internet!
twow: I don’t know. Maybe reading about yourself getting raped by tentacles and having them eat your unborn child does something to you?!
The tentacles still inside the dead body quickly slipped out, leaving the newly hatched nest for the infants to consume in the way they had to.
All: RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
All of the appendages released the yellow corpse covered in blood and guts with a ripped open belly, withdrawing to the dark blue pool of magic until none remained.
Fallen: The worst kind of rape. The guy just LEAVES.
Derpy: That wasn’t a guy.
twow: THAT WAS HELL.
Soon, the pool turned into a vortex again, shrinking in size, color and shape until it dispatched itself into the bleached parchment.
Fallen: I give up on logic.
Dozens of small critter-like beings
Fallen: ...what does that even MEAN?
twow: No clue.
crawled out from the remains, noticing all the gory organs around their birth grounds. Without hesitating, they instantly went for everything they could reach, the little shrieking and blood-soaked monsters. They were far away shaped as the tentacles which had planted them.
Fallen: I SERIOUSLY doubt English is this guy’s native language.
Derpy: He must speak gibberish. I’ve been understanding the language perfectly!
They had four limbs and a round little body together with a tiny neck attached with a head. Their black color and what seemed to be future wings separated them too. They were not ponies, but not far from it either.
Fallen: My mind went to changelings.
twow: That made me think of my OC Shade, and now I am sad.
The parchment laying on the floor was blank, all the symbols gone...
Fallen: Tentacle rape is a scientifically proven parchment eraser.
Fluttershy: ...is it over?
Fallen: Your part in the story is, yes. Not much you can do as a half-eaten corpse.
Derpy: You can talk now Fluttershy.
twow: Those tentacles understand the meaning of a one night stand. (shot from Pinkie’s Party Cannon)
Thirty minutes later, when the moon still stood high over the lands of Equestria, a red stallion hurried along the path to the cottage. He had been working overtime in order to make sure his family could last another week without his help, which sadly forced him into a very long day today.
Fluttershy: Wait, those things are-
Fallen: Still at the cottage. And hungry for flesh.
Fluttershy: EEP!
twow: Welp, he’s fucked.
He reached the door, panting calmly as he fixed his mane with a quick hoof-comb over it. He figured Fluttershy was probably worried sick of him and the baby, so the least thing he could do was to look a little decent
Fallen: No, the least you could do is put a period at the end of that sentence.
He couldn't hear very much from the inside as he put his ear to the door, but he could also figure that perhaps his marefriend had gone to bed anyways.
Derpy: twow was right. You’re dating him.
Fluttershy: (sobbing) ...was...
twow: “Tonight, we dine, in HELL!”
Without a doubt, he carefully pushed open the unlocked door, smiling in case she would sit inside the darkened room just to wait.
The door creaked open...
Fallen: Then the plane crashes into it and everything explodes.
twow: What.
In a united attack, dozens of monsters smashed up the door and swarmed over the big stallion while he still was in a state of shock. His deep voice could only shout as several bodies hardly big as his marefriend landed around him, shrieking in the background of the buzzing wings. All of them surrounded him, joining in their first feast of what they really needed...
twow: Why didn’t they just eat Fluttershy’s body?
Fallen: They started to, but it wasn’t alive enough.
Derpy: Guess they needed a live one.
In a distance within the dying echoes of Big Mac's screams and coughs, Twilight Sparkle the unicorn sat on a little hill with a fine view over the isolated cottage.
Fallen: Sipping a soda and taking notes.
twow: BITCH.
She could hear the fine pony slowly succumbing to the wills and hunger of the hatchlings, and she couldn't be more pleased. A little giggle escaped her mouth as she curved her lips into a smile.
Fallen: With an awkward crank-like contraption. Her mouth muscles stopped working five years ago.
Derpy: “It took them so long to complete it.”
"Looks like my spell still works..." she stated and looked down at the soft and chilly grass on the ground. Right next to her she had an entire stockpile of identical scrolls stacked in two saddlebags. Her magical horn focused on the bags, using a telekinetic spell while standing up on all four.
Fallen: She’s the Santa Claus of tentacle rape!
twow: Then she SHOULD have gone down the chimney!
Fallen: I know, right? Rude!
The belt swept around her waist, locking firmly and getting adjusted so they looked okay before she took her first step towards Ponyville.
"And now to get these to all the other bearers... then we can start over...".
Fallen: How many of those do you have? And you’re only concerned with the BEARERS?
Derpy: She does realize that they’re the most likely to be noticed when they’re missing, right?
With those words, the lavender unicorn released the most vile grin her lips could form as she looked up at the moon.
A flash of green surged through her reflecting eyes...
Fallen: Oh... oh god. Is that Queen Chrysalis?
twow: That’s one hell of a way to get revenge then.
The end
Fluttershy: I’ve never been happier to see those words in all my life!
Author's Note:
Well... this was my first attempt for a gore-fic. I don't know, I just wanted to be creative since there has been a bunch of clop-fictions with tentacles. You know me, being original and stuff.
And unless you've already guessed it: yes, this was meant to be as disturbing as possible.
Fallen: I’m going to shove a sawblade so far through your urethra that your grandkids will have tetanus.
twow: I’m going to jam a lightsaber so far up your dick that your grandkids will be fucking Jedi.
Derpy: I’m going to insert a muffin so far down your throat that your grandkids will smell like blueberries.
But what some of you probably didn't know is that there are actually hentai about this. Seriously, tentacles filling women with some weird stuff which causes them to explode, and people get turned on to that.
Fluttershy: HOW!?
twow: Because they’re fucking WEIRD.
Hey, I don't judge, and I can see sexual fetish in anything. If anypony of you actually clopped to this, I can just say... well, you're not alone (…...) Anyhow, you guys might wanna know that this is MY LAST ONE-SHOT.
Fallen: (cocks shotgun) One shot, one kill.
twow: (loads sniper) I call dibs.
Fallen: Oh, come on! That was my badass moment, and you just undermined it!
twow: No regrets.
Yep, so now it's back to Ponyville's Lusts and Tears of Ecstasy, each week and in a regular pace ^^
Fallen: Don’t get pointy with me, author.
Derpy: Can we point at it?
Thank you guys for being so understanding to my break even though it went on for a little longer than planned. Thanks, guys... seriously. I love you all.
All: WE HATE YOU!
And for the love of Celestia, comment and say whatever you want about this. Every little piece of critic is appreciated.
Fallen: You’re gonna LOVE this.
twow: We need to send this to him.
Brohoof on ya all!
Fallen: Fuck you, story. We’re done.
twow: LEAVING THIS NOW.
twow: The question is, are you going to live at all?
Fluttershy: (trying to aim a revolver at her temple)
Fallen: (grabs revolver) Dammit, twow, we JUST fixed her!
twow: I meant the story you, Fluttershy! You have to live!
Fluttershy: (sobbing and hugging Fallen)
Fallen: Home stretch. Come on, you’re strong, you can do this.
twow: Geez, I’m not good with mares. (slapped by Derpy)
Derpy: Apologize.
twow: (shudders) I’m really sorry, Fluttershy.
Before she could answer her own question, the carnivore inside her womb was done. The last piece of blood-drenched meat was crushed between its teeth, allowing it to slip out from the wide-open and empty womb only to slide through the bloodied inner walls and out past her labia. A whip of blood splattered out on the walls.
Fallen: ...how bad is it that all that comes to mind are graphic menstruation jokes? (slapped by Fluttershy and Derpy)
twow: Makes me wonder why I didn’t get hit when I had that thought of... never mind.
Fluttershy had her head laying down on the hard floor again. Her tears and sobbing coughs attracted the tentacle, thus the reason why it extended over her body to look down on her muzzle of sorrow.
Fallen: She must have been at the Pit of Despair’s gift shop. Right next door to the Gorge of Eternal Peril.
twow: Pit of Despair’s gift shop has some nice umbrellas.
The poor mare didn't have to turn her eyes to see it. She saw the monster covered in blood, how it swayed lightly to keep its balance while aiming at her from a meter's distance.
Fallen: Sounds like it’s hypnotizing her.
The mouth filled with razor sharp teeth opened wide, spilling out a thick waterfall of blood it swallowed during the ordeal over Fluttershy's face.
twow: Guess he hasn’t learned the art of swallowing. (bitch-smacked by Derpy) That’s a new one.
Derpy: WATCH IT.
She couldn't keep her mouth closed. She knew who's blood this was, and the shock itself was so strong she couldn't hold herself. About a gallon of the scarlet fluid filled her mouth, and not until she felt the taste of her own foal's blood,
Fluttershy: (clinging tightly to Fallen)
Derpy: (squeezes twow’s arm)
twow: I hate this story.
Fallen: We all do.
she became aware of the strong jerks in her stomach. She threw her head to the side and vomited up the blood with her latest meal, digested and warm. A puddle of brown, red and what-not escaped.
Derpy: I’m afraid to know what the “what-not” is.
Fallen: Allegedly, it’s a color.
twow: I never saw that in my crayon box.
The blood stopped raining down on her, finally done soaking her mane and face. Now she was ruined on the outside as well as on the inside... in all possible interpretations about the mind and body.
Fallen: Oh, don’t try to make the rape symbolic.
twow: OR CUTE.
The yellow mare coughed up the rest, forming more of the large puddle she laid in while the dark green tentacle retreated back to the dark blue pool.
Fluttershy: Thank you...
Derpy: I have a feeling it’s not over yet.
Fallen: Oh, not at all.
Fluttershy couldn't think anymore with the moment hovering over her memories. Only a partial wish for death passed by every now and then. But what pushed aside this idea was the large stallion still in her dreams.
Fallen: In her heart of hearts, she longed for King Sombra.
twow: That’s an interesting want.
She knew there would be at last some sort of comfort, that's why she only tried to think of him and not the gruesome and mortifying fact that her stomach was a little smaller now.
Fallen: Best. Weight loss. EVER.
Fluttershy: Fuck you.
twow: ...Damn.
But it wasn't over just yet. As she almost passed out, the tentacle hanging above her head aimed for its old target again, plunging inside the mouth of its victim. Fluttershy didn't care.
Fallen: She does what she wants!
It could do whatever it wanted to her now, not that she gave a flying feather about it. However, as something new popped up from the circle and pool of magic, she wondered if it was death approaching.
Fallen: You’d like that, wouldn’t you?
Fluttershy: So much...
Derpy: You aren’t allowed to die on me!
It was another tentacle, unique to the others and also its previous friend. This one was a bit fatter and had a much larger orifice on its tip.
Fallen: I guess it wasn’t content with eating the fetus. Now it lusts for the mother’s blood.
twow: Considering that this Fluttershy wants death, then it won’t be a big issue.
It's stickiness and slippery body was just like the others, however. Without any time to waste, it went it the same way like the previous one, only it was much more blood and mangled inner flesh now.
Fallen: And fuck you for thinking the rape train had any brakes.
twow: Damn thing has rockets on the back.
The mare let out a weak moan as her hole was penetrated again, leaving the rest to be as its new visitor had another goal in mind without her knowledge.
Fallen: This is from Fluttershy’s point of view. She shouldn’t know the tentacle had a hidden agenda.
Derpy: Can I call POV change?
Fallen: Do you have its number?
Derpy: Yep! It’s 1-800-867-5309.
The intruding appendage reached the massacred womb, discovering its purpose now could be fulfilled inside this warm and bloody inner. The orifice of this tentacle expanded and widened out to form a suction cup, and as soon as it was of enough size it attached itself to the enlarged hole of the womb.
Fluttershy: Where is this going...?
Fallen: Avoiding the obvious literal answer, you’re about to find out.
twow: (nervously looks around) I’ll tell you. Now.. (soniced by the Doctor) I DON’T EVEN.
Derpy: Doctor!
Fallen: WHO KEEPS-
Fluttershy shivered, wondering why they kept doing this to her. Finally she could also ask herself why Twilight would do this.
Fluttershy: I don’t know if I can face her after this...
Was this intentional? No, it had to be some mistake. A horrible, HORRIBLE mistake. And no, she couldn't even imagine to reach the consideration of forgiveness or intolerance to it. She was just completely destroyed, not sure if she wanted to live or die anymore.
Fluttershy: Death sounds nice...
twow: You aren’t allowed to die yet. (hugs Fluttershy)
Meanwhile, the tentacle currently residing in the other hole of Fluttershy started moving. It had been inside her rectum during the feast, moving occasionally every now and then without getting noticed due to the other event's gruesome nature.
Fallen: How fucked up must your life be if getting raped up the ass by a tentacle is the LEAST of your concerns?
twow: Read what just happened and ask that again.
But now it was time for it to serve a purpose too by moving deeper. It slithered deeper up her anal, moving past the more and more filthy parts... and pressed even further.
Derpy: Really?! Why can’t it leave her alone!
Even if her spirit was pretty much gone, Fluttershy simply couldn't ignore the intense ache as the tentacle broke in through the part of her bowl
Fallen: Dammit. Now what’ll she eat cereal out of?
twow: Your skull after I scoop your brain out of it.
Fallen: You mean Pinkie’s skull, right?
twow: No. Hers I’m turning into my water bottle.
Derpy: TWOW!
that wasn't her rectum anymore. Her sore and exhausted lungs found energy to squeal, followed by a dying grunt as soon as the appendage in her mouth reacted to the puny voice.
Fallen: Aw, she’s serenading it to sleep!
All but Fallen: NO!
And without any warning, it shot down her throat, going several inches down until it expanded her neck due to its size. The tortured mare widened her eyes as another tear among those many others broke out. She couldn't breath.
Fallen: She can breathe as well as I can even.
twow: I’m surprised that we’re not dead yet.
But the tentacle had a reason for this behavior. As soon as it had traveled far enough, fluids started pumping from its roots in the dark blue circle. The other tentacle deep up her anal did the same, in the end spraying out the goo traveling through it.
Fallen: Oh god, she got it excited. (slapped by Fluttershy) STOP THAT!
Derpy: Cut it out Fallen!
twow: I guess that you could say that it was... spraying. YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA- (slapped by Fallen’s bullet) Da fuq?!
Suddenly, Fluttershy couldn't feel anything where the slithery intruders traveled. Her guts slowly succumbed into numbness as the tranquilizing liquid poured from each vine-looking orifice. And when that temporary problem was solved, the tentacle inside her bowls
Fallen: Hentai-O’s! Part of this balanced breakfast!
twow: Serve with blood, semen and chunks of foal. (shot by Fluttershy)
Fallen: How did you get your gun back!?
kept digging further as the one in her mouth left her throat once again in peace. She could breath again, but not without receiving a stain of the sticky substance spraying over her bloodied face without an effect.
Fallen: ...I can’t think of a good bukakke joke. Someone help? (smacked by Derpy) Why are YOU hitting me!?
Derpy: I smacked twow for making fun of that. Don’t think I won’t do the same to you.
Somehow, the thing going unnaturally deep inside her behind managed to shift in size, shrinking to get smaller as it entered the tighter and more narrow guts. Apparently it was an ability coming from its magical origin.
Fallen: It’s magic. Cthulhu don’t gotta explain SHIT.
Derpy: It’d be nice though.
With Fluttershy not being able to feel anything on the inside, the disgusting being inside her marehood started pumping too.
However, since it was connected to her womb, it had a far more important thing to pump than a mere tranquilizing liquid.
Fluttershy: (whimpering)
Fallen: Oh, hey! Beyond the repeated smacking, I almost forgot you were here!
twow: That’s because she hasn’t been able to use words from the last break!
As the first bloated mass went from the pool up in the long body, squeezing past Fluttershy's bloody and massacred sex, it ended up in the enlarged womb. She could still feel inside that part of her body, and it was something round and rather hard.
Fallen: You know, tentacle demons aren’t the only creatures that lay eggs in the corpses of their victims. Y’all have seen Alien, right?
twow: I have NOT shown Derpy that...yet.
Fallen: Really? Twilight and Rarity LOVED the sequel.
twow: Derpy. Get ready to see a movie later.
Just a short blink of an eye later, another pump with the same size traveled through the tentacle inside her body, and another, and another...
Fallen: Damn. I can’t even imagine what kind of mess it’d make if she made it cum outside. (decked in the balls by Fluttershy)
twow: Fluttershy? You alright there?
Fluttershy: NO!!!
Load after load while the other monster dug past the remaining bowls, eggs of an alien kind stacked up in a pile inside the violated womb, tumbling around until the lack of space forced them together in a narrow formation. Fluttershy felt the load building up inside her, and she didn't want to know what in Equestria these things filled her up with.
Fallen: Well, maybe they’re in Equestria NOW, but they’re not OF Equestria.
Derpy: I’m sure that the Doctor would have taken care of these if he found them.
Fallen: Yeah, he’s kind of a badass.
twow: You have no idea...
But whatever it was, it had to be something bad after all the nightmarish things they had done to her. But no matter what they had planned, she was still doomed to just lie down and watch as it continued.
twow: Not like she really had a choice.
First eating her unborn foal and then filling her up with their own offspring. This kind and naïve mare didn't know these horrifying things even could happen.
Fallen: Actual animals lay their eggs in their victims’ corpses. Even if they don’t eject the previous fetus, that part of it isn’t new to you.
Derpy: It sure isn’t news to me.
Was this real? Was she dreaming? Yes, this had to be a dream, because such an abomination like this couldn't exist. But no, it hurt... and you don't feel pain in dreams.
Fallen: Plus, no Luna to bail her out.
twow: I’m going to write a VERY angry letter to Celestia.
Dream or not, the tentacle kept impregnating her with more eggs until the last one went inside and she was full.
Fallen: Well... at least it’s putting something back.
Derpy: It can’t replace what was taken!
Once the last egg was pumped inside her womb, the suction cup around this appendage sprayed something else than eggs. Now it was a fluid almost like the tranquilizing kind, only this one didn't make her feel numb at all.
Fallen: And THERE’S the happy ending.
twow: This isn’t going to end well, and you know it.
Fallen: Yeah... THAT’S what I meant.
Derpy: You have a backwards way of saying things.
The question mark was about to form up in the mare's head, but the time for that wasn't enough. Suddenly, she felt a retching in stomach, a very violent one too. And now she couldn't feel anything there either...
Fallen: So how did she know about the retching she couldn’t feel?
twow: Also, why hasn’t she thrown up before this?
She jerked her head several times, unable to get away from this progressing sickness occupying her mind to the brim with malevolence. In the end, she closed her mouth as a load of vomit traveled up her throat again. But then, she was forced to open it again and finally let the filth out.
Along with the thing that caused all of this.
Fallen: ...she puked up Twilight?
Derpy: What.
In an eruption of disgusting puke shooting up like a fountain in the air, the tentacle which had traveled all the way from Fluttershy's anal through her bowls had finally emerged from her mouth.
Fallen: All the way. All the way. ALL THE WAY THROUGH. ALL THE WAY.
All but Fallen: HAAAAAAATE!
The pegasus couldn't scream or even know what to do other than just stare at this horror. The slimy and filthy monster waved and kept shooting its warm liquid all over the floor, soon stopping when it realized it was outside again.
Fallen: “Oh, shit, sorry, I didn’t want that getting on your floor. That would’ve been SO rude.”
twow: “Allow me to continue to empty myself inside your body.”
But now the thin body of this extremely long tentacle was all inside Fluttershy, filling every bowl connected to her food digestion. And thanks to its numbing poison, she couldn't feel a thing
Derpy: So now she’s numb. At least she won’t feel more pain.
She stared, unable to breathe again and fully assured she didn't want to remember this. Even if this was a dream, she wouldn't stand living with it.
Fluttershy: I know the feeling...
twow: If this had been a dream, I would have shot Luna for not waking you up!
The sight of this struggling thing currently forcing out her tongue while thrusting from her sphincter, together with the fact that her stomach was bloated and round again, had made all this into a scene that convinced her to see one and only ending to this. She was going to die.
Fallen: Where the fuck did you THINK this was going?
Derpy: Her living?
Fallen: That’d be the worst thing ever.
In the heat of the waiting moment, the eggs inside Fluttershy's womb bathed in the fluids the planting tentacle showered them in.
Fallen: I hope they’re being cooked to eat. At this point, I don’t want these things to be things that exist.
twow: That goes for both of us.
It was a small quantity which had increased and got stuck to all the hard shells like glue. The sticky substance worked with nutrients, processing what was going to be the very fulfilled meaning and purpose of these otherworldly creatures.
Fallen: Did you only JUST figure it out!?
twow: Did that happen inside of her? Because then she wouldn’t have known yet.
Fallen: Her womb’s the only thing that WASN’T numbed.
The eggs found what they needed from the helpful fluids, soon enlarging as they all grew in size, maturing to hatch from where they were. All they needed was a warm and fertile ground, and now nothing could stop the ultimate goal for these hard containers of life.
Fallen: It’s called an abortion.
twow: One of the few times I would advise having one.
Fallen: I meant the story itself, but that too.
Fluttershy's lungs were blocked from all oxygen, her world was dying again. From the blur she could only see her swollen belly vibrating and moving, the eggs hatched. It was tight and warm, loose and cold, just about enough and way too much.
Fallen: Pick something and stick with it.
Her eyes rolled back as the last tear she could muster fell from her tear canal. The world faded more and more, reality grasped her soul and embraced her in a hollow hug, telling her it was alright.
Derpy: Just let her die already!
If she could, her lips would have smile.
Fluttershy: (sob)
Derpy: (hugs Fluttershy)
In an explosion, all walls in the cottage were stained and repainted in a second with thick and scarlet fluids. The ceiling and floor had several bits of squishy substance stuck to each surface alongside the blood. Like a maddened painter creating a piece of angered art, the room was redecorated in a grim aura from the warm blood dripping down the walls.
Fallen: That’s exactly what you wanted, Derpy. Happy?
Derpy: NOT LIKE THAT!
twow: Derpy’s broken. And I already KNOW that Fluttershy is.
The sparkle in the once timid and kind pony's eyes disappeared, leaving behind her defiled and lifeless corpse in a pitiful scene of breeding. But what had hatched from this body had no respect for its grounds, instantly looking around in their newly gained shape and bodies to see their first source of meal.
Fluttershy: (desperately trying to unsheath a scimitar)
Fallen: Goddammit, why are you acting like this!?
twow: (takes scimitar) Why do you THINK?
Fallen: No, I know, but she’s never been like this! Not even through the worst pieces of shit on the face of the Internet!
twow: I don’t know. Maybe reading about yourself getting raped by tentacles and having them eat your unborn child does something to you?!
The tentacles still inside the dead body quickly slipped out, leaving the newly hatched nest for the infants to consume in the way they had to.
All: RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
All of the appendages released the yellow corpse covered in blood and guts with a ripped open belly, withdrawing to the dark blue pool of magic until none remained.
Fallen: The worst kind of rape. The guy just LEAVES.
Derpy: That wasn’t a guy.
twow: THAT WAS HELL.
Soon, the pool turned into a vortex again, shrinking in size, color and shape until it dispatched itself into the bleached parchment.
Fallen: I give up on logic.
Dozens of small critter-like beings
Fallen: ...what does that even MEAN?
twow: No clue.
crawled out from the remains, noticing all the gory organs around their birth grounds. Without hesitating, they instantly went for everything they could reach, the little shrieking and blood-soaked monsters. They were far away shaped as the tentacles which had planted them.
Fallen: I SERIOUSLY doubt English is this guy’s native language.
Derpy: He must speak gibberish. I’ve been understanding the language perfectly!
They had four limbs and a round little body together with a tiny neck attached with a head. Their black color and what seemed to be future wings separated them too. They were not ponies, but not far from it either.
Fallen: My mind went to changelings.
twow: That made me think of my OC Shade, and now I am sad.
The parchment laying on the floor was blank, all the symbols gone...
Fallen: Tentacle rape is a scientifically proven parchment eraser.
Fluttershy: ...is it over?
Fallen: Your part in the story is, yes. Not much you can do as a half-eaten corpse.
Derpy: You can talk now Fluttershy.
twow: Those tentacles understand the meaning of a one night stand. (shot from Pinkie’s Party Cannon)
Thirty minutes later, when the moon still stood high over the lands of Equestria, a red stallion hurried along the path to the cottage. He had been working overtime in order to make sure his family could last another week without his help, which sadly forced him into a very long day today.
Fluttershy: Wait, those things are-
Fallen: Still at the cottage. And hungry for flesh.
Fluttershy: EEP!
twow: Welp, he’s fucked.
He reached the door, panting calmly as he fixed his mane with a quick hoof-comb over it. He figured Fluttershy was probably worried sick of him and the baby, so the least thing he could do was to look a little decent
Fallen: No, the least you could do is put a period at the end of that sentence.
He couldn't hear very much from the inside as he put his ear to the door, but he could also figure that perhaps his marefriend had gone to bed anyways.
Derpy: twow was right. You’re dating him.
Fluttershy: (sobbing) ...was...
twow: “Tonight, we dine, in HELL!”
Without a doubt, he carefully pushed open the unlocked door, smiling in case she would sit inside the darkened room just to wait.
The door creaked open...
Fallen: Then the plane crashes into it and everything explodes.
twow: What.
In a united attack, dozens of monsters smashed up the door and swarmed over the big stallion while he still was in a state of shock. His deep voice could only shout as several bodies hardly big as his marefriend landed around him, shrieking in the background of the buzzing wings. All of them surrounded him, joining in their first feast of what they really needed...
twow: Why didn’t they just eat Fluttershy’s body?
Fallen: They started to, but it wasn’t alive enough.
Derpy: Guess they needed a live one.
In a distance within the dying echoes of Big Mac's screams and coughs, Twilight Sparkle the unicorn sat on a little hill with a fine view over the isolated cottage.
Fallen: Sipping a soda and taking notes.
twow: BITCH.
She could hear the fine pony slowly succumbing to the wills and hunger of the hatchlings, and she couldn't be more pleased. A little giggle escaped her mouth as she curved her lips into a smile.
Fallen: With an awkward crank-like contraption. Her mouth muscles stopped working five years ago.
Derpy: “It took them so long to complete it.”
"Looks like my spell still works..." she stated and looked down at the soft and chilly grass on the ground. Right next to her she had an entire stockpile of identical scrolls stacked in two saddlebags. Her magical horn focused on the bags, using a telekinetic spell while standing up on all four.
Fallen: She’s the Santa Claus of tentacle rape!
twow: Then she SHOULD have gone down the chimney!
Fallen: I know, right? Rude!
The belt swept around her waist, locking firmly and getting adjusted so they looked okay before she took her first step towards Ponyville.
"And now to get these to all the other bearers... then we can start over...".
Fallen: How many of those do you have? And you’re only concerned with the BEARERS?
Derpy: She does realize that they’re the most likely to be noticed when they’re missing, right?
With those words, the lavender unicorn released the most vile grin her lips could form as she looked up at the moon.
A flash of green surged through her reflecting eyes...
Fallen: Oh... oh god. Is that Queen Chrysalis?
twow: That’s one hell of a way to get revenge then.
The end
Fluttershy: I’ve never been happier to see those words in all my life!
Author's Note:
Well... this was my first attempt for a gore-fic. I don't know, I just wanted to be creative since there has been a bunch of clop-fictions with tentacles. You know me, being original and stuff.
And unless you've already guessed it: yes, this was meant to be as disturbing as possible.
Fallen: I’m going to shove a sawblade so far through your urethra that your grandkids will have tetanus.
twow: I’m going to jam a lightsaber so far up your dick that your grandkids will be fucking Jedi.
Derpy: I’m going to insert a muffin so far down your throat that your grandkids will smell like blueberries.
But what some of you probably didn't know is that there are actually hentai about this. Seriously, tentacles filling women with some weird stuff which causes them to explode, and people get turned on to that.
Fluttershy: HOW!?
twow: Because they’re fucking WEIRD.
Hey, I don't judge, and I can see sexual fetish in anything. If anypony of you actually clopped to this, I can just say... well, you're not alone (…...) Anyhow, you guys might wanna know that this is MY LAST ONE-SHOT.
Fallen: (cocks shotgun) One shot, one kill.
twow: (loads sniper) I call dibs.
Fallen: Oh, come on! That was my badass moment, and you just undermined it!
twow: No regrets.
Yep, so now it's back to Ponyville's Lusts and Tears of Ecstasy, each week and in a regular pace ^^
Fallen: Don’t get pointy with me, author.
Derpy: Can we point at it?
Thank you guys for being so understanding to my break even though it went on for a little longer than planned. Thanks, guys... seriously. I love you all.
All: WE HATE YOU!
And for the love of Celestia, comment and say whatever you want about this. Every little piece of critic is appreciated.
Fallen: You’re gonna LOVE this.
twow: We need to send this to him.
Brohoof on ya all!
Fallen: Fuck you, story. We’re done.
twow: LEAVING THIS NOW.
Fallen: Can anyone else agree that this story’s the worst thing ever?
Fluttershy: YES! (sobbing)
twow: (hugging Fluttershy) The FUCK do you think?!
Pinkie: (from TV) I... I really shouldn’t have done that. I’m so, so, so, SO sorry, Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: (sniffle) I-it’s okay... I think I’m fine.
Fallen: The stunts you tried to pull with the guns and swords? Fluttershy, you’re NOT fine.
Derpy: You were really scaring me Fluttershy.
twow: Real talk. Why were you doing that?
Fluttershy: I... I...
twow: Talk to us. We only want to help.
Fallen: Think of it like the little bit of storytime we had during the marathon. Only less uncomfortable.
Fluttershy: Well... the thing is... I...
Fallen: Christ’s sakes, Fluttershy! Spit it out!
Fluttershy: I can’t! I’m sorry, but... it’s something I really, really can’t talk to anypony else about.
Derpy: Be nice Fallen!
twow: Fluttershy, we aren’t going to force you. But, I think I can speak for all of us when I say that scared the shit out of all of us.
Fluttershy: I know. I overreacted, I wish I didn’t, and I’m really sorry for making you all worry. It’s just... this is too personal.
twow: Let’s drop it then. Fallen, how about that Batman marathon?
Fallen: Oh yeah, we were going to do that! I’ve got Batman Begins, The Dark Knight and The Dark Knight Rises all ready to go!
Derpy: Can the Doctor join?
Pinkie: And can I come over and bring my friends?
Fallen: You know what? The more the merrier!
Dash: (from TV) This is gonna be AWESOME! Just like that Avengers marathon! I’ll go grab everypony else! (flies offscreen)
Derpy: Fallen, do you think that Dinky could join us?
Fallen: Eh... how old is she? These movies are kind of dark and violent.
Derpy: She’s 11.
Fallen: I call that close enough.
Derpy: Great! Unlock the doors Pinkie!
(The armory doors unlock and open.)
Pinkie: I’m so excited for this! It’s gonna be SO EPIC!
twow: Guess we’ll just wait for everypony then, huh Fallen?
Fallen: Looks like it. See you when you get here, Pinkie.
Pinkie: Don’t start without me!
(Pinkie presses the button, and the TV turns off with a blip.)
Fluttershy: YES! (sobbing)
twow: (hugging Fluttershy) The FUCK do you think?!
Pinkie: (from TV) I... I really shouldn’t have done that. I’m so, so, so, SO sorry, Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: (sniffle) I-it’s okay... I think I’m fine.
Fallen: The stunts you tried to pull with the guns and swords? Fluttershy, you’re NOT fine.
Derpy: You were really scaring me Fluttershy.
twow: Real talk. Why were you doing that?
Fluttershy: I... I...
twow: Talk to us. We only want to help.
Fallen: Think of it like the little bit of storytime we had during the marathon. Only less uncomfortable.
Fluttershy: Well... the thing is... I...
Fallen: Christ’s sakes, Fluttershy! Spit it out!
Fluttershy: I can’t! I’m sorry, but... it’s something I really, really can’t talk to anypony else about.
Derpy: Be nice Fallen!
twow: Fluttershy, we aren’t going to force you. But, I think I can speak for all of us when I say that scared the shit out of all of us.
Fluttershy: I know. I overreacted, I wish I didn’t, and I’m really sorry for making you all worry. It’s just... this is too personal.
twow: Let’s drop it then. Fallen, how about that Batman marathon?
Fallen: Oh yeah, we were going to do that! I’ve got Batman Begins, The Dark Knight and The Dark Knight Rises all ready to go!
Derpy: Can the Doctor join?
Pinkie: And can I come over and bring my friends?
Fallen: You know what? The more the merrier!
Dash: (from TV) This is gonna be AWESOME! Just like that Avengers marathon! I’ll go grab everypony else! (flies offscreen)
Derpy: Fallen, do you think that Dinky could join us?
Fallen: Eh... how old is she? These movies are kind of dark and violent.
Derpy: She’s 11.
Fallen: I call that close enough.
Derpy: Great! Unlock the doors Pinkie!
(The armory doors unlock and open.)
Pinkie: I’m so excited for this! It’s gonna be SO EPIC!
twow: Guess we’ll just wait for everypony then, huh Fallen?
Fallen: Looks like it. See you when you get here, Pinkie.
Pinkie: Don’t start without me!
(Pinkie presses the button, and the TV turns off with a blip.)
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